Its not like im saying "oh a charac i did". that stuff is just doodles from school, nothing serious you know.
ENKM- Start from scratch and learn the basics of letter structure. dont bother wasting ur time with the color schemes till u can find a nice simple flow with your letters. a couple quickies in class
I DID start from scratch I've been on other various sites like this and I got told to move on to more complex stuff
Those are better but perfect it. then after uve perfected your basic letters make small simple changes to each letter and work with it a little more
Yea I know basically I wanted crits on the newer stuff(the 2 top pieces) and the rest is just like an image dump, been tryin this shit for 2 years and everyone either say I'm good or I'm bad I want to be ready to paint already but I know I'm not ready and well doesnt seem like I can find my style i really like old school graf and try to model it after that
haha damn you guys tellin me to finish my shit, i was so over that too. i guess ill finish it when i have some time.
ENKM: Your name has no vowels :O word are supposed to have vowels. You sir, have defined the laws of english. Also, ditch that fucking crown Also: BITCH YOU MISUSED SHIPPING LABELS! Didn't you read the warning when you ordered them? Pigs gonna come knocking at cho door soon. Gonna go to jail bitch. Have fun getting raped.
bump I got no crits on the last page. mostly just care about my letters the characs are just bullshit doodles
ENKM- Dont fill your pieces yet, especially not with colored pencils lol. Your second post was better try donig different stuff with them now, tilting them and shit just to play around
Somber- Bring the letters in your pieces closer together ENKM- It doesn't even look like you used bars on the first piece, You say you've been writing for two years? @Clash E is a Vowel.
meh i sometimes use bars i sometimes dont lol i use colored pencils cuz im to poor to get any good stuff and i live in a wee little town lol so no stores here to rack from, and yes 2 years on and off then been doin it everyday for like 9 months now, unlike others i just want to do old school graff sure sum of the stuff these days is good but its like everyone just has to have a perfect looking style and all that crap but the truth is graff was created simple so i want my stuff to stay relatively simple hell doesnt even have to be perfect i have a throwie that i think is pretty good i could post pics of that if it makes a difference haha
View attachment 598735 Crits please? enkm- dont use a ruler on your letters bro. pekins- your letters are real nice, maybe bring them closer together they seem pretty far apart Newt- YOU SUCK ASS. just playn i like that E i actually did a e similar to that on one of these sketchs.
Werm- your R in both of those seems a little big. I like your W's the most. Try to get crisper edges on the corners of the letters if you know what i mean ENKM- lolslolslolslolslolslolslolslolslols. that throw up is horrible, along with your handie. You need to be more critical of yourself, like more self conscious of your stuff. Your explanation for having bad or as you call it "simple" graffiti just doesnt really make any sense. You dont have to listen to me but you came on this site for crits so there they are
@thepekins ok what makes my throwie horrible??? throwies are supposed to be sumthin ou put up quick and fast they dont hafta be perfect @sick hahhh didnt use a ruler made lines with a pencil then went over with pen marker etc lolz :l just keep the crits comin im enjoying this its helpin a lot lol
Bro if you are going to get mad every time someone says your shit is bad (it is, all of it, not just your throw), then you might as well just quit right now. Throws are something to "put up quick" that reflects your style, like "this is how dope the shit I can pull off in a hot spot is", if it's bad then you are just making yourself look bad.