Bars are what good letters are made from, at least when you are a toy, if you or anyone else does not know what they are read this, I would suggest reading all of it, there is a plethora of information in here. http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-New-To-Graffiti-Start-Here!
@ViniVidiVici thankx bro glad u like it anyway figured id put this in here for some inspiration this is one of the sickest people in the graff world POSE http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9InLKbbJL-g
CPA - I believe theres a graffiti starters thread on here somewhere. You'd probably be better off posting/reading there rather than here. Crits would be appreciated for these two. The 'S' in SKOPE looks a bit shit.
CPA - That looks better already, graff is a slow process, don't expect to banging out crazy pieces anytime soon, it takes years, but if you keep doing it the way we tell you will progress very fast, keep working on those simps and making good bars, once your consistent with that we'll show you some 3d/shadows and how to manipulate your letters to develop your own style, but it all takes time and effort, just remember that. Skope - Yes the S is messed up but that is fixable, but the K and O are bad, redo them, can't even tell that they are letters, I like the P and E though, for the second piece I like it overall but the first letter I don't know what it is, I think it is an R but you should redo it and make the far left bar of the R a continuous bar if ya know what I mean, that way it is not as confusing.
You're almost there...you just gotta learn what parts to make the shadow go into the letter if that makes sense...like on your s you messed up some parts..i tried, just somethin i did in 10 seconds though so just take it as a visual. couple weeks or so and you should have it down [Broken External Image]:http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2158/imgp0106t.jpg
Yeah i gotta get used to doing 3D every direction and @above pic it looks like you did a different point perspective than me but that still helps.
Yo try not to have all the negative space between the P and the E.... Your are okay but negative space like that isn't good.
REACH - good shit. top of the r would look better if it wasnt so circular PESO- the P is too far from the other letters the O blows. Maybe make it look less like a zero on a digital clock and more like an O CPA- not bad for a first sketch. You should work on a handie and build your pieces from that Skope- cant even really read that first sketch if i didnt know from your name. I would scrap the first piece completely. The second one is on the right track. The bars arent awful. Cant tell what tthe first letter is looks like a Z to me? SORE- cant really crit you since its so simple. Try bending the letters a little bit now and fix the 3D on the S