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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. extinct

    extinct Senior Member

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    yo mewn your friends with werm... i can see style influences up on the w an m
     
  2. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    this is so wavy . heh
     
  3. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    that e doesnt fit
     
  4. rockytherocker

    rockytherocker New Member

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    The post is very informative. It is a pleasure reading it. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts.

    orlando limo
     
  5. FlatScank

    FlatScank Banned

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    @Sevenways, thats a fresh sketch that should be on a wall
     
  6. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    @Zewl You down to exchange?
     
  7. Skope2

    Skope2 Senior Member

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    Sevenways that piece is sick!

    Looking for crits on these two.
    Redid the 'O' on repo to make the cut look less like a 'C' the 'R' still covers too much of the 'E' though, will need to work on that.
    And far too many connections and shit on SKOPE, will not be repeating that style, just looking for anything else you can spot for me to work on.
     

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  8. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    i like the first one more
    but you need to define your letters. it's illegible. very.
     
  9. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    what he said, 3d dont look that bad tho
     
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  10. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    skope- go simpler, but that 3D is looking pre good...

    new shit, crits?
     

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  11. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    somber- your O and B dont really match everything else, but other than that its looking pre good...
    safe- thats a pre clean style you got going on, i like it.
    4menace- finish that! its looking doope

    i know i dont belong here, but i like the crits i got... so here it goes... crits'd be nice, and the charac was just a result of boredom
     

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  12. thepekins

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    thepekins Guest

    idk if you write repo or not but theres already a repo
     
  14. bomber boy

    bomber boy Member

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    ye i like the letters but the first thing i notice is that in your first letter u only use straight bars like in most of ur letters i think it would look alot better if u kept the straight bar style for the u and the b
     
  15. bomber boy

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    letters looking gd although the direction of ur 3d has changed at the end i also like ur character and how u have ur tag in his smoke cloud its a good idea
     
  16. Cl4sh

    Cl4sh Senior Member

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    Haven't posted on here in a minute. Heres some shit I did in class today. Trying to progress. Can't tell if I'm getting better or worse. My S's suck. My hands seem to be getting better at least...

    Clash1 002.jpg
    Clash2 001.jpg
     
  17. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    ChASH lol, still no good
     
  18. Cl4sh

    Cl4sh Senior Member

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    Funny that you said that. That's a joke between me and my friends that know I write. Love that L though for some reason. And what's still no good. The hand or the shitty piece?
     
  19. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    clash- work on your bar consitancey, simple it up a bit more, dont connect the letters like your doing, and you should get better
     
  20. Skope2

    Skope2 Senior Member

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    Ah right, yea i am. Ill start writing something else instead then. Cheers for the heads up.
     

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