That has lots of potential, only letter that is weak is the M but the rest are fairly good and you kept the same style throughout, not bad.
CPA - You really need to take a look at how to use bars instead of going in like that. The letter proportions are all out of whack, the P extends into the A far too much. Tempo - Thats a better improvement than your other shit! nice work. Going with a new style here, not finished yet. Theres something wrong with it, but i cant quite put my finger on it. If i could get some crits that would be cool..
The E is messed up and the bottom of the S could look better, not gonna say anything about the whole KO deal I'm sure your gonna try to make it work.
E is super plain and looks like a backwards 3, width of bottom bar of D is off as well. the middle bar of the N is lookin a little weird too
Vini - pretty much what ribcage said, the 3D looks decent though Ended up with this, it was definately more hassle than its worth.
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@skope what happened to the P? its lookin pretty hurt. and it seems like your jumpin steps again puttin breaks and extensions in, they are wack cut the nose off the P and start by makin it a circular P cause right now u have part squared off and part rounded. Work on having consistent bar width before you start putting breaks in your letters. Look at the O, the break in it doesnt match up width the rest of the O. Err body is gonna keep telling you to work on the basics until you got it down. go simpiler and try to make sense with your letters before you start throwin in add ons, extensions, etc
Isaac - keep at it. thats original. just learn where to place your layers a little better. develop that style some structured stuff i been working on cant really make a straight line tho my hand shakes everytime i try to thanks a lot east coast molly