both are with the same kind of brush-esqe style (what I call it haha) but def not my most used way of drawing graff... I'll post some more when I draw newwer ones, thanks for the crits EDIT: the second one says NEIN which is No in german.. dunno if I had the [e] and in the grammatically correct position tho... and yeah the is effing horrible in that one
@crimateNC .... like the handies .. lot bettr then mine haha ... but on the top one i would lose the arrows maby cap the bars better or try an work out some of the points .... just my opinion
@Gatsoi i like it ... fill an 3d to come i guess new one... crits plz Snapshot_20110405 by grinder13, on Flickr
Gatsoi- looks nice bro, add some 3d and a fill. Did this one for Ian, was bored in my job training class just messin aroundd. lol
sketch for a mates shed little sister wanted me to include manga in a piece the pride piece on a mates shed
Yo Shroomsh I really like your style, can't give you much advice since im not even close to that good but i really like your stuff any one got any crits for me??
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@webs - try to get some consistancy in the bars, and more uniform letter structure, otherwise I believe you're on the right track ! @delyte - simplify! all the extra addition on the lettering is just gaudy and draws away from the piece as a whole... notice centrysam and how he rarely colors his pieces, he's focusing on lettering which is an essential to good graff, no matter how sick your coloring is you can't augment lack of motivation towards lettering... hell I get bored sometimes halfway thru pieces just stick at it @centry - I really like your bombs/throwies... I'm not too good at them myself so yeah I can't give much crits in that department.. as for the piece worry less about extensions and focus on lettering imho. not that you have bad lettering its just they could flow more >.< but still at least everyone's making a stride forward and not giving up
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