Thanks bend. I feel as though you could've done more with that B. Given it more flavor or something with the rest of the letters.

 

yeah i mean it was really done as a quick simple sketch for a up and go thing not really trying to get complicated on those but will keep ya advise in mind thankx bro!

 

The first ones are the initial letters.
I used bars in all of the letters, i also went through the new to graffiti thread and picked up some tips, thanks for that.

 

lyk - no no no no no no, those bars and shit are all off. start from scratch, drop ALL of the extensions.

Dont take offense, but your clearly a beginner, which means you have to start from the ground up. that means keyboard letters. I know its boring as fuck and everyone hates keyboard letters, but trust me once youve got the bars and structure down you can start to do proper extensions in the right places and have them look slicker. cause right now that piece looks like dicks.
You want your letters right now looking abit like these, until you can nail them. I couldnt be fucked to do all of them, but you get the idea.

 

@Tempo, man you still have zero letter structure. DO SIMPLES.

@Lyk, that's not what people mean by bars man. Listen to Skope and check out the New to Graffiti thread.

@Bend, I like it, but I feel like the D could be changed a bit to match the other letters a little better or something.

 

Self crits - The bottom of the S is whack. T is pretty whack. 3D needs more shading but that can be done another time..

 

The top right side of the D could be chunkier, the top of the E could be skinnier. Just my two cents.

 

keep the bars the same width

 

of course. i just did this in about 5 seconds in paint just as an example.

 

well you need to do bettter!!!!!!


j/k

 

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Post all your pictures in one post from now on. And why are you doing the same piece but with different fills? Branch out more.

 

jesussaves, pull that shit again and I'm banning you for flooding... always gather all your flicks into one post

 

Quick biro flik

 

@skope likin it but the center of the b could have a space instead of a line to make all the letters match other than that you on the right track
Sketch i did today kinda went alittle wild, but cant learn nuthing unless you try it out so! sry will have colors up soon prismas ran out on me

 

Only bit that looks a bit off is that extension coming up from the bottom of the N. other than that it looks good man, im sure itll look better once its done too.

 

skope killin em. do it up I wana see paint on ur hands. peace

 

@skope your D is weak, whats up with all the little oin smooth bar connectons/extensions; Like the top of D and bottom left of D? Top 2 bars of E are bad, the top most one looks like a block/chunk.... Your B is really bad, Top half of it looks like the D and the top half of R. Then in the middle you have two bars just laying on top of eachother.... Your T is fine, and the bottom half of your R is fine. You got the right idea for the top of the R i guess, but its shape dont work atm, you gotta work it more until its propportionate, and the extension on the bottom left of R is bad as well

 

Here's some quick shit. I'm going to fix it up a little before putting the 3D on and coloring it. CRITS?