hey user that shits dope, especially the color schemes and charcs on some of those peices keep it up bro
Just read this thread and look at the crits people are giving/getting. They're all the same. Get your bar widths down. Keep all your letters the same height and width. Keep them simple until you understand how they work, and eventually you'll be able to add connections and extensions that flow with the piece to give it your own style.
after a few other attempts i realized the idea i had, and posted above was not working. so i decided to revive my squid, this time on a paper in which i could color it. crits please i think this may be more intricate thing i've tried so far. gonna wait for crits before i ink it.
you've got the basic principles of bar usage down, but there still are some uneven places that need small tweaks. the 3D is fine more or less The round part of the P is smaller than it should be, and the H is too wide, get the two vertical bars closer to each other next time. also the 3D on the I's dot shouldn't have any angles in general, I wanna give you props on the fast progress. ink it, and keep it up
dankbudz - looks good Mc Satan - u need to move faster with the marker, cause other wise the marker bleeds and the line looks blotchy the top one i did yesterday but the bottom i did about a week ago i wanted to try something different from what i have been doing crits please
[Broken External Image]:http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/7159/dsc0003se.jpg not quite finished for the battle atm, but am sorta cbf so idk if ill finish it
its actually a fine tip pen which is why it bleeds so much, still not quite used to it. here is the finished version getting the pink right is a pain in the ass. i srsly need to get job asap so i can order markers, this water color pencil thing is way to labor intensive,and un precise
^^ Tight shroom love your letter t's exchange for mr slack....any crits please cuz i have been critting [Broken External Image]:http://img37.picoodle.com/i57h/potts/16fp_8bf_u905z.jpg
^^ everythings a little too close together for me rev i do like the letters just spread them out abit for me personally
SHROOMSH- that looks dope! but i feel like the T coulda been done differently. im not really feeling it with the whole piece. REVN- Post yo ish in the right thread, son but uh feedback... try smoothing your lines out and dont overlap those lines onto the letter before, and practice, and take your time. also on the handy above that, dont try so hard to make it look cool, also dont worry about addons yet untill you can do good hands, itll just make ya look more toy. colored this, i probably will eventually put a background, but i got lazy and stuck with solid color fill.