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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    hey user that shits dope, especially the color schemes and charcs on some of those peices keep it up bro
     
  2. ERAYS

    ERAYS Member

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    so basically what you're saying is keep doing straight letters and get the letter structure down?
     
  3. Rasm

    Rasm Senior Member

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    Just read this thread and look at the crits people are giving/getting. They're all the same. Get your bar widths down. Keep all your letters the same height and width. Keep them simple until you understand how they work, and eventually you'll be able to add connections and extensions that flow with the piece to give it your own style.
     
  4. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    after a few other attempts i realized the idea i had, and posted above was not working. so i decided to revive my squid, this time on a paper in which i could color it. crits please i think this may be more intricate thing i've tried so far. gonna wait for crits before i ink it.

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  5. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    you've got the basic principles of bar usage down, but there still are some uneven places that need small tweaks. the 3D is fine more or less
    The round part of the P is smaller than it should be, and the H is too wide, get the two vertical bars closer to each other next time.
    also the 3D on the I's dot shouldn't have any angles
    in general, I wanna give you props on the fast progress.
    ink it, and keep it up
     
  6. arsebanditskaelsucker

    arsebanditskaelsucker Senior Member

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  7. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    yeah dude lookin good, diggin that character

    crits?
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  8. Messer

    Messer Senior Member

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    dope shit anime, amk reppin' <3
     
  9. Graff2k11

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  10. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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  11. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    dankbudz - looks good

    Mc Satan - u need to move faster with the marker, cause other wise the marker bleeds and the line looks blotchy

    the top one i did yesterday but the bottom i did about a week ago
    i wanted to try something different from what i have been doing crits please
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  12. toopski

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  13. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    its actually a fine tip pen which is why it bleeds so much, still not quite used to it. here is the finished version getting the pink right is a pain in the ass. i srsly need to get job asap so i can order markers, this water color pencil thing is way to labor intensive,and un precise
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  14. DaFugg

    DaFugg Senior Member

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    I don't think that lower case I really works. just looks out of place.
     
  15. Shroomsh

    Shroomsh Senior Member

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    exchange piece for "dzert" from canberra
    Fuck i love female artists ♥
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  16. arsebanditskaelsucker

    arsebanditskaelsucker Senior Member

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  17. REVNoner

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  18. arsebanditskaelsucker

    arsebanditskaelsucker Senior Member

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    ^^ everythings a little too close together for me rev i do like the letters just spread them out abit for me personally :)
     
  19. REVNoner

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  20. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    SHROOMSH- that looks dope! but i feel like the T coulda been done differently. im not really feeling it with the whole piece.
    REVN- Post yo ish in the right thread, son
    but uh feedback... try smoothing your lines out and dont overlap those lines onto the letter before, and practice, and take your time.
    also on the handy above that, dont try so hard to make it look cool, also dont worry about addons yet untill you can do good hands, itll just make ya look more toy.

    colored this, i probably will eventually put a background, but i got lazy and stuck with solid color fill.
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    Last edited: Jul 17, 2011