rasm check 2 pages ago, for this concept simple straight letters worked better which is why i used them Edit: just a quick sketch thought i'd go for something pointier crits and suggestions pls not continuing with it till i get some different points of view on it
MC... It turned out pretty good. I still don't like the cheereo dot for the I, but that's personal preferance. E turned ot fairly well too. Work on your rounded 3d. The bottom portion of the 3d bit on the dot of the I is a bit flat. Try drawing cups, coke cans, lighters, markers, anything with a curve to it to practice. As for the new on thing seem to be going well. I would make the bottom portion of the l run parallel (sp?) to the back of the E and go from there.
i don't write mos i'm just playing with the letters ignore the fill on this one i was playing around with fineliners [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2367.JPG i did this late at night when i couldn't sleep so its messy [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2368.JPG couple of throws [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2371.JPG [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2372.JPG this ones way too messy [Broken External Image]:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2363.JPG
anyone care to battle me in the toy forum round robin? preferably someone that would not blow me away wanna do it for the practice
@Nah, I'm not really feeling how those M's are looking. Your throw technique could use some work too, try working with each letter individually to get a nice and quick flow to it. I think you should do a round robin with satan, it'd be a good match between you two.
i got you, no one else will battle me hahaha. and i need the practice too, been forever since i sketched
mc satan, how about skrim or skyrim? and as far as that fear piece, it turned out decent, your straights and 3D are on point. my only problem is that both the fill and the characs are a bit sloppy nah, you wanna battle too?
lets do a 3 way ( im kinky like that lol) and let nah choose word again same demands though full color
I wouldn't say that his straights or 3D are "on point"... The 3D is alright but it's messed up in a few places. For example, the 3D on the top part of the F is a lot thicker than the 3D in the middle of the R. I'm not saying it's bad, but don't get it in your head that it's perfect either. And I might throw down a chrome sketch... don't have the time or resources to make it full color though.