Ader try and keep your bar widths the same. Namely the bottom of the R. The legs ya know. Nah try and grt your S as the same size as your M and O. And Afro that second thing looks fresh. Nice style only thing i don't like is the top of the R. I feel like that bar shouldn't bend inward. Maybe outward instead haha
Props to Sear for being an actual writer, instead of a sketchbook junkie. decided to go back to my old word, F's, L's, and T's are starting to piss me off Hate the C on this one, but either way, Crits please
3d in U to L is a bit off bars are not consistent in width, and this might just be mi but im not a fan of the skull with down syndrome
afro i think yours is pretty sick and unique. and slvr your skull drawing is alright but the letters need more work. latest sketch
Skeletor that fill and background is sick! But your letters are a little whack. I don't like the k because it doesn't really look like a k. Fix the top legs. And the m, I don't really like the flat part of it. And try n keep your bar sizes the same
thanks man, yeah my letters are pretty whack but i was trying to keep it simple while still being a little unique. i tried to keep the letters basic and box like. but thanks for the critique.
New here, i write beast and since 12oz is down temporarily thought i'd try this Fucked up my B on this one Old dies sketch
^i have a friend who used to rock that name, then he got busted haha. anyway, crits; dont do that overlapping bars thing, looks wack. your bar width is a bit weird too, and finally leave extensions alone for a while till your structure gets a bit better. EDIT: your S is hurting big time too
Beast, try and keep your bar width the same. I noticed that mostly on your Bs. Go even simpler. Like on your second one that S isn't the best, it looks like an underline and a P. I don't like the E because of the extension going in, lose that. Just my advice.
im gettin tired of capital Ls so i made it lowercase, for simplicity, not a big fan of the E needs some work but i like my D so far, any crits would be nice, oh and i realized the lines in all the letters with the little square is lame, but in the L it makes it look like a I sorta.