REZUME OR DIE: 1. get a camera or fix it or what ever 2. what markers were you using? 3. the first 2 R and E letters are ok the rest are wack because you did the letters going across the page like that also next time draw guidelines 4. draw guidelines then do simple block letters this help you get better at letter structure also BARS 5. love the characters and the dragon lol SMACK 1: bin it its wack then draw block letters use a ruler if it helps but you need letter structure also another tip work on your lines
the letters...there chopy and have alot of dead space dont be afraid to tuck ur letters behind the last like the top bar of ur e behind the s try thicker bars^^^^, i personaly am done postin pieces cause noone even acknoledges em
cool good simple start trying to bend your bars a bit more because the e and s look a bit crooked and the top of the o is a bit wack but everythings great apart from that
@aeso looks good man i like that flick .. keep sketchin man crits plz Snapshot_20110823_2 by grinder13, on Flickr Snapshot_20110824 by grinder13, on Flickr Snapshot_20110824_2 by grinder13, on Flickr
and dont write esoe or esoes, and start simpler. its apparent you are working off some one elses style or letters. And you needa work on keeping your bars the same width, and the extensions on the s's are to big in my opinion
aeso= work your letters together its not a crime to overlap there just floatin around humr- the r in the yellow one looks more like an a and the r in the light purple can be an e without the ex mark keep workin on it give crits to get crits
kehm, well if your gunna try and rock a 5 letter word with only 3 different letters its gunna have to be clean as yell because all imperfections between letters will show.
u need to go waaaaay simpler . i can maybe see an s but other then that it hurts my eyes looking at it lol
^^ya lose the arrow bits lose everything in purple work on structure alot more basicly go back to the drawlin board n go simpler its too busy with no direction
old design for my boys tshirt company kasc id just try to make sure your bar lines up all the way up like on the second p, n i cant tell if thats 3d or 2d in the middle of the last n second one