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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. xflare

    xflare Member

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    REZUME OR DIE:

    1. get a camera or fix it or what ever
    2. what markers were you using?
    3. the first 2 R and E letters are ok the rest are wack because you did the letters going across the page like that also next time draw guidelines
    4. draw guidelines then do simple block letters this help you get better at letter structure also BARS
    5. love the characters and the dragon lol

    SMACK 1:

    bin it its wack

    then draw block letters use a ruler if it helps but you need letter structure also another tip work on your lines
     
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  2. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    the letters...there chopy and have alot of dead space dont be afraid to tuck ur letters behind the last like the top bar of ur e behind the s try thicker bars^^^^, i personaly am done postin pieces cause noone even acknoledges em
     
  3. aaesoo

    aaesoo Senior Member

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    first colour piece i've done in while.

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  4. xflare

    xflare Member

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    cool good simple start trying to bend your bars a bit more because the e and s look a bit crooked and the top of the o is a bit wack but everythings great apart from that
     
  5. ipaint.

    ipaint. New Member

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  7. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    and dont write esoe or esoes, and start simpler. its apparent you are working off some one elses style or letters. And you needa work on keeping your bars the same width, and the extensions on the s's are to big in my opinion
     
  8. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    aeso= work your letters together its not a crime to overlap there just floatin around
    humr- the r in the yellow one looks more like an a and the r in the light purple can be an e without the ex mark keep workin on it
    give crits to get crits
     
  9. KehmONE

    KehmONE Senior Member

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    Haha, it's funny because I went completely freestyle and used zero inspiration for the letters.
     
  10. Stigma02

    Stigma02 Senior Member

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  11. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    this my friends piece. he wanted me to put it up for him
    crits would be appreciated
    SSVA.JPG
    it says S.S.V.A
     
  12. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    tell ur friend to start over I get a headache lookin at it. way too busy with no structure at all
     
  13. Stigma02

    Stigma02 Senior Member

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  14. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    kehm, well if your gunna try and rock a 5 letter word with only 3 different letters its gunna have to be clean as yell because all imperfections between letters will show.
     
  15. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    u need to go waaaaay simpler . i can maybe see an s but other then that it hurts my eyes looking at it lol
     
  16. Stigma02

    Stigma02 Senior Member

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  17. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    ^^ya lose the arrow bits lose everything in purple work on structure alot more basicly go back to the drawlin board n go simpler its too busy with no direction
     
  18. 603Bombsquad

    603Bombsquad Senior Member

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  19. Kasc-One

    Kasc-One Member

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    ai1234.photobucket.com_albums_ff404_Sce161_Mobile_20Uploads_1314393550.jpg
    workin on simples cus i wanna get it correct. crits
    ai1234.photobucket.com_albums_ff404_Sce161_Mobile_20Uploads_1314495612.jpg

    for a girl
    ai1234.photobucket.com_albums_ff404_Sce161_Mobile_20Uploads_1314508321.jpg
     
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  20. sema

    sema Senior Member

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    old design for my boys tshirt company
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    kasc id just try to make sure your bar lines up all the way up like on the second p, n i cant tell if thats 3d or 2d in the middle of the last n second one