2nd is 2d, last is 3d, this is unfinshed, yea i see the mistakes but thats why its in pencil, any crits

 

something new just to say im alive LOL
crits ppl?

 

The S is tight, wish I could say the same about the rest... too many nonsense extensions and add-ons

 

fuckin round workin on extensions and shit random ass word didnt like it.

Photo 238 by ripmb, on Flickr

 

suggestions and crits on this while i can still fix it? no idea what to do with the E was thinking since it stands out i could do the fill different from the rest

 

Jhiz. i havent been here in a while bro but honestly it looks like youve gotten worse

 

Quick sketch. Bored in class

 

Crits.

 

those colours are burning my eyes man. and it'd probably be better if you closed off the holes in the ltters like using a line or something rather than have those little triangles, which you missed the 3d on.

 

ok done with this i need crits please. first time for a couple things, coloring with markers, eye-ing the 3d instead of ruler, and also first time i try these really fat letters. so please crit

 

wtf

 

workin on simples cus i wanna get it correct. crits


for a girl

 

Am i good enough to be in the inter thread? ive been on puregraffiti since '08 but it seems there forum is down alot..

 

sketch of Aztek

 

oh and jiska. i think that shit is tight. all of it. extensions be fine

 

bottom page bump crit please

 

The 3d isn't bad for a first time eyeball. good color selection. I suggest putting a gap in the mouth of the E. Keep working on it.

 

Bumpppp disss critsss dawggg

 

sol i like that flick its solid . maby try spacing letters out just a little more , other then that i think its a nice flick ..

quicky ,,, just fuckin around


Snapshot_20110901_1 by grinder13, on Flickr

crits welcome