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Just something I did quickly, feedback?

 

a lil work to be done on letter structure before u add style. dont like the big gap between the e and s.

 

You're missing the shadow under the first and middle bars on your E.

 

quikie with a sharpie wich i think is kinda lame but ill post it any way

second trying bubbles with rusto, due to poor placement i ran out of paper so my "D" got cut off

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lol. good observation. looking ok mesa, id fix up your s a little bit.


i want some feedback this time, last time i posted this, not one word was said about it.

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i like it epod ur black outline could be cleaner. Im no expert so thats all i can say

 

boy do i feel ignored

 

fed- i like the first one it has a different style but needs work
throwie needs work also

 

fed, how did u do the 1st one? like, with marker on paper? and the 2nd.... is it paint on paper?

lol, they look... different. not too bad, id say lose all the curlies. just bend it, sont make a full curl, and spread it out.

 

epod, nice but dont do so many breaks in the letters and practice the flow more...the lines seem kidna wably and shit

feel yo pain wreck :unsure: ...its cool you dont wanna talk man

 

Thanks for the feedback, and yea, I think the S is horrible h34r:

 

wat u think. i personlly dont like it mainly the R

 

fed. i like the sketch yru and make all the curls proportionate. but the paint one is terrible :blink: h34r:

 

looney..
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LON
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looney,all your letters in the second throw(on the first page) have a certain style,but its lost on the Y.try fixing that.it will flow better.Yeah Y is a hard letter when your just starting out,K too.

 

yo proxe what brand of colors r those

 

yo man whats up w/ ur dancing shit¿



LOL

 

yo howdyfly, its not awful but im gonna give u the newbie speech since its ur 5th sketch about.. ok well its better to start off simple like block letters then after u get those good mess around with them, twist them or stuff like that and ull eventually find urself a style and one thing dont bite styles from ppl, but u can look at some pics and like play with ur letters like influence urself by them

keep practisin man
peace

 

Thats true letter structure is big and ill work on it.