exactly how i saw it @ first, tho in the vid i saw of skuf he even said a shit load of writers have used his S
the twists on the bottom are completely different, n theres really only so much u can do wit the tops of s's. soars throw is dope n i dont see nun from skuf except that theres a loop. the pieces are comin together to jus need to get that structure down before u get too crazy wit shit. peace
No flames. Flames = 90's and just... bad. But overall nice letters. Keeping the width and straightness consistent is key for my... i mean that style. Nice faces, also for my... i mean that style, its got nice shading
yo hex the first pic needs work, if it was me... i would make the letters fatter and the lines thicker... but thats me. crits for me? sorry bout how big they are... both are for battles
mtk thanks, i like you second one alot, maybe a more vibrant color scheme for the first one would help out? and clearly im in no position to make suggestions or criticism
MTK- learn to rotate your pictures. but the bright colored bubbles in the black just arent doing it for me. also, hard to read with the inside lines not defined. Hex- lettters arent that bad but still work on fillling in the negative space. and not so sure what that bottome pic is supposed to be but pretty dope
Your connects are poorly done to put it blunt but you'll get it. Definitely looks like you needed more space, the I's too hidden, the GAN is almost illegible. Good color scheme and ideas with connects, execution just needs work.
Norf, I fucking love you. Everyone my way is just like that's dope bla bla blah. But i know shits off. Thank you for putting it blunt and next time put it even more blunt. Blunt. Anyways thanks, I'll definitely keep working on it and lmao I got to the I and I was like...shit I gotta have this I and 3 more letters. I pulled it off but not the way I really wanted. Thanks dude peace.
did this in like 20 30 minutes. Hex- H is a lil sloppy with the line. and the 3D on the X is different the the H. i like how you (toy) actually get that you need to continue doing simple shit. all toys are like WOAH look at that wildstyle and try to imitate it leaving a pile of shit. keep it simple till you got developped lettering. CRIT THIS PLEASE.
i like it... might look better with some color. but you cant really make out the last letter... i know its a c but some peoplemight think its a G.mabey the ends of the C can be the same instead of a block and a curve
Thanks man but I found another forum that helped me 3x as much in one day than this one did in 3 only reasson i came back is to look at some peoples pieces i love seeing what other people are doing.... I appreciate it though
My first serious attempt at any form of graffiti. I've been running with some writers for a year or so now and finally getting my arse in gear to start work on my own material. Please critique the hell out of it as I really love graff and want to improve.
Gim- why is the person green The L and O do not fit the piece i know. but i would still appreciate some crits.