Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Blackbooks

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

Share This Page

  1. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,025
    • Likes Received: 1
    I'm not talking shit homie... I'm saying you should show us your letter structure. When we see good letter structure, then you take a step in the direction you want to go. After that, style development is up to you. Why do you think I continue posting in the toy thread? I don't have an inflated ego dude... haha.

    The side bars of your H's are SINGLE BARS and should not bend halfway through
     
  2. BigBend

    BigBend Member

    • Messages: 30
    • Likes Received: 0
    aight i gotcha phill well heres another one i just did the h bends downwards again but check the rest out bro!
    ai43.tinypic.com_beujk1.jpg
     
  3. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

    • Messages: 328
    • Likes Received: 0
    Tit's a little sloppy, and I didn't take enough time on my extensions, they are all fucked.

    IMAG0152 (1).jpg
     
  4. gemer

    gemer Senior Member

    • Messages: 330
    • Likes Received: 0
    structures good but yea it tis a bit sloppy nice color combo tho
     
  5. BigBend

    BigBend Member

    • Messages: 30
    • Likes Received: 0
    Gemer- only thing i see wrong is the spacing bro try working on that
     
  6. DEXA

    DEXA Member

    • Messages: 21
    • Likes Received: 0
  7. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

    • Messages: 788
    • Likes Received: 0
  8. SkateJunt

    SkateJunt Senior Member

    • Messages: 223
    • Likes Received: 0
    those letters are wonky as fuck!, stop all the drips and highlights n shit and learn some letter structure! a reason that I havent posted any of my attempts at style and piecing is cuz i know it looks wack, id only post it if i though it was dece and wanted someone elses opinion, do you honestly think thats good?anyway

    fuckin around wit throws, see anything decent?
    afarm8.staticflickr.com_7174_6513639823_f11596a4ed.png
    Picture 159 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
    afarm8.staticflickr.com_7034_6513639567_74dc0e4198.png
    Picture 161 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
    afarm8.staticflickr.com_7011_6513639363_14d2e26e00.png
    Picture 162 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
    afarm8.staticflickr.com_7160_6513639143_49e5f4767d.png
    Picture 160 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
    afarm8.staticflickr.com_7166_6513638937_1c74ec1a61.png
    Picture 157 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
    afarm8.staticflickr.com_7034_6513638713_5c509f4521.png
    Picture 158 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
    afarm8.staticflickr.com_7154_6513638455_43f83e603f.png
    Picture 163 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
     
  9. gemer

    gemer Senior Member

    • Messages: 330
    • Likes Received: 0
  10. gemer

    gemer Senior Member

    • Messages: 330
    • Likes Received: 0
    @ coleo work on structure no need for the waveyness go with more strait lines right now then move up
     
  11. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

    • Messages: 788
    • Likes Received: 0
    @gemer thanks ill work on it!
     
  12. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

    • Messages: 788
    • Likes Received: 0
    @SkateJunt i think the third one is the best outta the bunch
     
  13. react70

    react70 New Member

    • Messages: 1
    • Likes Received: 0
  14. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

    • Messages: 788
    • Likes Received: 0
    ^work on your R and put a shadow on it
     
  15. BigBend

    BigBend Member

    • Messages: 30
    • Likes Received: 0
  16. BigBend

    BigBend Member

    • Messages: 30
    • Likes Received: 0
  17. Jiska Matos

    Jiska Matos Senior Member

    • Messages: 138
    • Likes Received: 0
    150210-0241.jpg 180110-0306.jpg 2011-12-10 18.09.38.jpg

    some doodles i do at work

    @BigBend- Love that 3D style keep it up
     
  18. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,626
    • Likes Received: 2
    @BigBend: Get a better camera asap then we'll crit it. Otherwise the only thing I can really say it distinguish the bars better from each other? Fuck if I know anything about 3d pieces though

    @Jiska: Difficult to read but to me, it seems to have a shit ton of extensions on some. maybe tone it down?

    Some bs. Bars are inconsistent and 3d is probably off a bit, but its just a concept I quickly did.

    ai126.photobucket.com_albums_p104_skier46_IMG00493_20111214_21a2cfae1d30d2df16bafadded9a590dd4.jpg
     
  19. Jiska Matos

    Jiska Matos Senior Member

    • Messages: 138
    • Likes Received: 0
    thks 4 the crits MN... this is just something i do at the studio in the dead hours, they have some cool markers and i just doodle a lot
     
  20. BigBend

    BigBend Member

    • Messages: 30
    • Likes Received: 0
    haha thankx bro and will do.
    jiska really digging the colors and pieces