Did this in August but probobly never posted it cause I thought it sucked.

@ Jiska - that middle one is pretty nice wit the bear n' all that. It say AMOTE yeah?

@ Gemer - your letters are a lil inconsistent in size.

I got to say I got my work cut out too, but I will probobly stay with this general concept for letters i've been doin unless some1 convince me otherwise.

 

that dudes creepin

crits?

 

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Bump for crits...

GEMER - Yeah, I don't have any decent markers at the moment - did you say my shit is not real?

 

heres a better pic. i had to put laminate paper over it so it wouldn't smear so that's what you see that is wrinkled
HAEC

 

getting better, keep it up. Learn how to shade cleaner.. I don't want to see any lines.

 

agree^^ definatly gettin better with em big bend but fer sure shading is a bit down hill keep em comin tho there gettin better
@ shell703- nuttin to special man no ones critiqing it cuz its lamee no affence but it looks just like the A on my keyboard except sloppier and with color haha

 

On the bottom one my apple green was dead so the S didn't get colored correctly =/. Crit em.

 

@shell 703 no ididnt say it wasnt real haha i meant to put its not really* original
@synone liken the bottoms style but not really liken the k or e and maybe the r lol but still diggen them i guess keep em comin there gettin better

 

finished dis up

 

@ wonky i like the bright colors idk about the lettering tho man wack extensions coming from no where and did you trace the bottom one or somethin cuz there both like theeeee exacttt same just different color haha the bubbles are even in the same spot.....go more simple man do tons of drawings not just one and then trace over it again and again just recoloring it gotta get better and you wont that way
@dankbuds looks pretty good for a simple structures all there just not diggen the D keep em comin tho man youll get better

 

oh I shoulda said I fixed that bottom one in Photoshop / tried different colours and straightened the image out. By the extensions you mean the sill arrows coming out all over the place?

 

any improvement?

Picture 164 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

 

another one

Picture 165 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

 

getting better, like phil said, try to make none of the outer lines visible.
and as for smudging, invest in some of this, really worth it: http://www.krylon.com/products/workable_fixatif/