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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Wonky

    Wonky Senior Member

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    You think the chip on the bottom of the a curl needs to go and that should link?



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    Now I inked the outline, I realize what you were saying about the breaks. I fucked up the Y because it doesn't look like one anymore...


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  2. always crushin

    always crushin Moderator

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  3. Wonky

    Wonky Senior Member

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    Coloured it - made a pigs ear of it. Looks shit. Still, i learnt how to balls up decent structure with breaks. Onwards and upwards.


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  4. Tempo718

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    lil ruff draft warm up today. need to do this type stuff more often na mean.

    wonky - not bad bad bro, drop the extra stuff for now. keep the letters solid.

    crushin - allways unique

    syn - you might try getting consistant letters before adding on color and 3d
     
  5. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    tryin to get this shit right side up... wtf
     
  6. Simon

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  7. Mr.Hater_666

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    That last kirsty is fresh
     
  8. m4rsh

    m4rsh New Member

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    ok, so i literally started learning graffiti about an hour and a half ago so dont expect perfection (ive seen so many pretentious and arrogant posts here from 'eletists')

    but yeah, its pretty generic but i aint done it long enough to adopt my own style and flow yet

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  9. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    crits please
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    ^^ work in progress
     
  10. "PHYSH"

    "PHYSH" Senior Member

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    a little something from Lebanon.....
     
  11. SkateJunt

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    lovin fuckin around with straights lately, the shadinf on the y is fucked a bit, and the left bar of the y kinda fucked up too, but any crits?
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  12. Phillip McDougall

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    The R fucks up the flow. Chicken bone nowison.
     
  13. SkateJunt

    SkateJunt Senior Member

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    yeah im not gonna do that extension on the r anymore, i was just trying it out. how are my other letters though?
     
  14. Wonky

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  15. MN Nice

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  16. Wonky

    Wonky Senior Member

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    Tight as fuck MN
     
  17. Phillip McDougall

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  19. Wonky

    Wonky Senior Member

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    Fitted in three sketches today, not going to bother inking or colouring anything else until I get some structure and legibility going. I would like to inject some flow too, not sure when flow is not just breaking structure atm so trying to cut the shit out. Yesterday's effort was wank - especially when coloured (I fucked that right up)....



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  20. Phat 2

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    mn nice, top one is where it's at. go roll that up on some highway or a heaven spot somewhere. maybe find a well visible rooftop.. but props. not a fan of the bottom one. you got very similar things going on with ribcage where you two have a lottta edges and not enough curves so all your letters look kinda stiff and lack motion or fluidity...