You think the chip on the bottom of the a curl needs to go and that should link? Now I inked the outline, I realize what you were saying about the breaks. I fucked up the Y because it doesn't look like one anymore...
Coloured it - made a pigs ear of it. Looks shit. Still, i learnt how to balls up decent structure with breaks. Onwards and upwards.
lil ruff draft warm up today. need to do this type stuff more often na mean. wonky - not bad bad bro, drop the extra stuff for now. keep the letters solid. crushin - allways unique syn - you might try getting consistant letters before adding on color and 3d
ok, so i literally started learning graffiti about an hour and a half ago so dont expect perfection (ive seen so many pretentious and arrogant posts here from 'eletists') but yeah, its pretty generic but i aint done it long enough to adopt my own style and flow yet
lovin fuckin around with straights lately, the shadinf on the y is fucked a bit, and the left bar of the y kinda fucked up too, but any crits? Picture 167 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr
yeah im not gonna do that extension on the r anymore, i was just trying it out. how are my other letters though?
exchange i did for my friend, pretty wonky but still any tips? Picture 134 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
Fitted in three sketches today, not going to bother inking or colouring anything else until I get some structure and legibility going. I would like to inject some flow too, not sure when flow is not just breaking structure atm so trying to cut the shit out. Yesterday's effort was wank - especially when coloured (I fucked that right up)....
mn nice, top one is where it's at. go roll that up on some highway or a heaven spot somewhere. maybe find a well visible rooftop.. but props. not a fan of the bottom one. you got very similar things going on with ribcage where you two have a lottta edges and not enough curves so all your letters look kinda stiff and lack motion or fluidity...