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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    for the round robin. looking for some crits on this and my other piece up there too.

    ai126.photobucket.com_albums_p104_skier46_IMG00690_20120227_207b79735af057c96c2a0ed4694ee04f84.jpg
     
  2. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    thats actually not that bad, don't get the bg tho
     
  3. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Dude, me neither lol. Was gonna go for like a smokey fade away at the top, but it sucked so I just covered it.
     
  4. stien

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    idk did it at school IMG_0176.jpg
     
  5. Colors

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    for the lolz
    highlighter and pens
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  6. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Colors I'm digging that letter style.
     
  7. 7thIncision

    7thIncision Senior Member

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    @ Stein - Bro, you've got too much going on in that piece. 3D, with the bubble background, and the drips? Work on the letterforms first dude, they're the most important. Your S, E and N and pretty uneven if you look close at 'em. Ditch the flash, perfect the basics. ..... and that tail on the N is whack, N's don't have tails. Stop that. :p

    @Colors - man, I'm diggin' the pen steeze. and that E's dope as fuck. Only crit is that I'd try for some cleaner scratch fills on the bubbles, yo.
     
  8. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    MUES do you always outline before you fill?
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  9. stien

    stien Member

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    i just tryed to do the broken glass cuz class was boreing
     
  10. stien

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  11. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Yep. Unless its a freestyle which I rarely do because I fucking blow at them.
     
  12. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Really? Thats weird dude, the way i learned and idk if its the popular thing but you do your fill oultine first. Take my piece for example. I did the orange outline of my piece, then filled it then did the outline in black. I think its better that way so you can fix any mistakes you find and you can tweak stuff. You should try it, i thought everyone did it that way haha
     
  13. dankbudz

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    if its simple 1 color, id try coloring then outline... aka what naked just said
    yo naked, why you got 2 accounts?
     
  14. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    I dont use colors any longer my friend

    edit: and mues especially for walls. Try doing an outline then filling with paint..lol. Sketching the fill first then outlining will get you ready for painting better
     
  15. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Oh yeah I do that for paint. Just not sketching for some reason. I'll try it out from now on.
     
  16. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    as of 10:17 am? lol
    daily simpls.. iggy pop
     

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  17. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    eye am sew board.
    Lookin' good seder.
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  18. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    thicken up them bars!
     
  19. 7thIncision

    7thIncision Senior Member

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    Mildstyle - Man, I'm feeling that letter style. I don't know if I'd thicken up all the bars, just make sure they're all even. Or try twisting or bending them a little more.
    Dankbudz - simples are sexy, bro.
    Here's one of mine, kinda rushed it. Not even going to bother with 3D on the next one, my letterforms have gone to shit over the winter apparently.
    ZEWSE Bbook piece.jpg
     
  20. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Zewse not a fan of that fill, and lose the extensions.
    @Dank good shit as always. Hurry up and say something gay so i can put it in my sig haha

    Trying some new stuff, might need to keep it simpler (as always)
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    Crits on this?
     
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