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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Your K is a little off, doesn't look right imo. Your E goes in too much (that's probably just me though) and the bottom right of your U is a little thin. And those extensions are eh, at least your letters don't suck and you didn't try to put 301241 fucking arrows. Good job overall. Not intermediate worthy though.
    And fuck both of you^ turn your heads.
     
  2. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    go way simpler. you gotta walk before you can run bud, and crawl even before that. you are no where near being able to post in that thread. no offence. you're bars are consitent though, just even out those letters, and lose the added on shit and it'll get better.
     
  3. DIC3

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    Definitively better than mine.
     
  4. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    the perspective on your can characters is bad, letters are lack-luster, extentions need work, and need to clean up your 3d a bit (some places it's visible in the "paint cloud" others not at all it wouldn't be entirely missing anywhere if the letter is visible).
     
  5. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    I am taking everyone advice on how to get better what u guys think on this?

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  6. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Axil - Looking better, but your A is HUGE compared to the rest. Try to keep them close to the same size.

    My bar widths got fucked on this one. I still liked the outcome though.

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  7. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    I Like it apart from the E for some reason it looks like a M flipped so try making it a straight line And what do you think off my stickers :)

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  8. dada1231

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  9. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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  10. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    Tried to add a bit of color to my work, is it any better ?

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  11. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Just keep trying on your bars and spacing. simple fills are fine but just don't get too hung on colors right now. Use a lined notebook to help with your lining.
     
  12. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    What has happened to this thread. Goddamn.
     
  13. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Already know this one sucks, but maybe you could get the idea i was going for, i only like the A really.
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    I realize this is the same piece as before, but i forgot i wanted to do the A and E in diferent colors so i redid it. you could crit it
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  14. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Naked finish that one up im kinda digging it.

    Tried pushing the envelope a bit, gonna do much simpler for the next few.
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  15. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Your letters are lacking Cred, never forget about your letters. But those colors are beautiful and it's clean, props to that. That C the top extension is wack the bend is eh, you shoulda straightened left leg of the R and the right leg of the R is ew. Top/middle of the E doesn't work in your favor and you should've probably straightened the left bar of the D, and fixed the top right and bottom middle parts of the D. But it's good you're trying new things. I still wait to see a really dope simple from you though.
     
  16. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Quick collab with the money maker!
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  17. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    For some reason I really like how yours goes over his. That's a fucking dope thing I'm gonna do that one day.
     
  18. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Mild Dope as fuck.

    Simpless
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  19. Axil

    Axil Senior Member

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    @Mild Every time you do something i think its good
    @Cred TO SICK

    tried to add a little bit more to my letters + i know my X is bad BTW I'm thinking of changing my name because Its kinda a hard name to do good stuff with my name for me X + I are hard to do anything creative to.

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  20. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Haha nobody in here should take compliments from anyone short of tasty, dank, occasionally kwu, ribcage, or naked. Listen to them. And cred that's better but stop with you're pretty colors so much. Sketch/outline and repeat. Every once in a while throw in some color. But not every single time. Good colors though.