Lmao@kwu That slotr is clean SENO @Axil what theyre saying is get your stuff where your not in need of crits, then you would be open to give others some. Till then your gonna catch hell.
Indeed. And read the comment I wrote you a few pages back, that should send you off in the right direction.
Just wanted to bump this to get some more crits/opinions. Axil said it's "a bit bad", but apparently he isn't a real solid source. And KWU said, in reply to Axil's comment, "it's not as remotely bad as yours", so I was wondering if it still qualifies mine as bad? I know it's nothing special and I don't have style or anything yet, but still. Thanks.
I wouldn't call it "bad" It look as if your going from someone else letters but, i would say even the letter height and the width of the letters themself.
lado thats not bad. that is the kind of stuff u should be working on . simple an to the point i would say eather square of the bottom leg of the t an h rather than having them angled . or have them rounded other than that just keep sketchin bro
@Earwig Amazing. @Axil Work with evenly spaced bars for now and try to make your outline crisp and not wobbly. The 3d on the top of the R shouldn't be so rounded off as well. Other than that good work keeping it simple. Keep drawing. Just a sketch. I hate the D.
wtf is going on in here good shit 2 atma exchanges with a bahd scank(sorry for the quick outlines) View attachment 623823 View attachment 623824
Cred- add some 3D to that i want to see how it will look + do u write or do u just do paper Cyfer - sick colors what markers do u use?
Earwig don't post here. You're too fucking good and RLM that's dope but the L looks more like a V or U, and the extension on the leg of the R is eh. I really like it though
@always crushin - I think that on that last one you posted it would look so much nicer without the outer outline. Part from that it pretty dope. @Axil - Wtf is happening with that w... The middle line of it is taller then the rest, that dont look to good.. Plus work on your outlining, it way to shaky. @Cred - Nice simple sketch I like it , only criticism is that D like you said, I think if you just didn't put the edge going down in early, just let it be even with the rest it would look dope, if you get what I meaning..
thx Sol i can see what your saying Axil its just sharpie i didnt take my time naked that is clean man cred keep that shit up son slotr i admire what you do
characters are dope the light one is good as well the sine er whatver id just say even up ur bars and make your lines crisper other then that you appear to be going in the right direction i know i told u t clean up ur lines and then post this View attachment 623835