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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Silky Johnson

    Silky Johnson Banned

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  2. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    One of your own created things**
    H1p3 crushes you hahaha
     
  3. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    yea the alter ego wasn't as amusing as I had thought it would be.
     
  4. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    yeah you crush yourself, muhfukka
     
  5. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    lol hipeoner i could try it but i cant do P's...i guess i gotta learn all letters eventually, i was thinking of either going back to my old one seak, or maybe try something like Ashmuk, like that jewish word shmuk..thought it would be funny but i dono still trying to decide. i add the 3d after i draw the outline most of the time but sometimes i add in 3d after each letter too...dono if u were asking me though cuz i suck

    thanks dank, il space them out more then what i got now.
     
  6. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    lol muhfukka dave chappelle, gotta love that guy.
     
  7. Beko

    Beko Senior Member

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    okay i see it now!
     
  8. Beko

    Beko Senior Member

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    the O bothers me a lot! crits appreciated!
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  9. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Beko the K looks nice, the wobble in the O looks strange you're right. the top of the E looks iffy as well, maybe try making it expand a bit like the bottom right leg of the k?

    Improving my structure.
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  10. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    your D could be confused for an O and i dont like how short the left leg on the R is but other than that i love your style. nice work
     
  11. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    beko- like both you and cred said, the O is weird. i like your T and and K though and the bottom part of your E is nice. maybe with the middle bar of your E have it coming out a little bit in the back of the E if u know what i meen. the shading looks good too i think.

    Cred- as usual it looks pretty fucking dope from my stand point lol. only thing i dont really like is the left leg on your R and that thing ontop of your D that comes out to the right looks kinda weird, sorta makes it looks like a crazy J lol. other then that though i like the D and i think your E is sick.
     
  12. Willis1989

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    Cred - Like the piece but not really feeling the top of the D
    Kote - Id move the K over a little, feel free to ignore me but It looks like its taking to much off the O
    4Eyes - Dont like the top of the Es and S otherwise the throws are ok

    I fucked up most of these, thought id post em anyway, fuck Ws I started writing Lead instead of Lewd cuz just cant do Ws and Ive been doing Ws since my first name twice as long as my other letters, I think the LEAD looks better anyway, could I get some crits on these?

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  13. IronyATB

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    @Lewd your fills need work, too messy.

    Also graff culture is too homophobic, I plan to change that. Embrace the dick, become the dick.
     
  14. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    yea not too bothered about colours atm just letters, just coloured it to fuck around
     
  15. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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  16. kwu

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    ^ dope these letters suit your style more

    havent given crits in a while but i see some worth mentioning
    Lewd/Lead n Kote, just avoid the extra kinks, bends and extentions, and focus on the movement of the bars, the illest simples in my opinion dont need all that extra shit if the flow is on point
    Cred, I kno you're trying to develop your style, and your structure is improving quick, but keep practicing simples cause that shit will help you figure out how your letters best coincide and where you can kill negative space without throwing in the extra ish.

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  17. dankbudz

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    that shit is straight fressh, atma
     
  18. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    thats dope shit atma only thing I dislike is the philly get you a swisher lol
     
  19. Mildstyles

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    Atma i love the 2 page ones. And that last one is so dope.
    Cred thats much better but fix yo D
     
  20. Reality

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    Opinions? Somewhat new to graffiti. Practiced for quite some time. Some suck, some are better.

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    Last edited: Apr 30, 2012