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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    you WILL get better just keep practicing
     
  2. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    trying to do @ least one sketch each day. wish I had the patience to do more.
     
  3. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    if you are trying to improve, dempo, the advice id give is to not color your work for a while. just stick with black sharpie and pencil. youll get twice as much done... which should lead to quicker improvement.

    gotta start coloring my older shit, just got a new black sharpie so i can outline fuck ya...
     

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  4. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    ^^Reality- like no-sleep said, just keep practicing and you will see improvement. its good that your practicing lots of different letters but you should pick a name and practice that and try to master it, its still good to experiment with other shit too though, just concentrate mainly on what you write. keep it up

    Dempo- your letters look cool but i dont really like the coloring in there. the shadowing looks good i think, try to push your self to draw 2-6 sketches each day or something. patience will grow

    dank- i think that looks sick, the one thing i dont really like is the D but it doesnt look bad, better then what i can do. the streaks looks good and i like the concept with your E and O...the ripped neck character is dope too
     
  5. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Dank that M and S are poppin' Good shit man.
    @Dempo very nice. The middle bar of the G maybe should go behind the curving bar on the left? shit idk haha

    Fucked up this fill.
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  6. Friidom

    Friidom Senior Member

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  7. Reality

    Reality New Member

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    Thanks for feedback no-sleep and Kaze. Will def keep practicing.
     
  8. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    cred - that E is sick and i like how it matches the C. the D i think looks a lot like an O though
    Friidom - work on bars and keyboard letters
     
  9. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    yeah I should have used a ruler to make my vanishing point lines cleaner and fucked up the line to the leg of my r .... any other crits ?

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  10. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    the O is a no go, loose those lines in the letters. you want to get your letters down before you mess with that. and pic a vanishing point that compliments your piece. id try something to fill the neg space between the P and R. and don't draw your lines all the way to the vanishing point. and there is also no need to use a ruler, looks clean as is
     
  11. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    ^that looks good, maybe make your O a litttle bit smaller and the circular part on your P, the first bar on your R looks a little crooked. i like those lines u have coming out of the centre point of your o, p and r, the one on the O is a little crooked it looks but thats minor. other then that it looks nice and clean
     
  12. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    yea the koper would help with the negative space. Ill have to work on the vanishing point shit that was my first go at it. And the o well fuck an o lol gonna have all kind of fun gettin them down. but thanks for the crits

    2 -3 weeks of piecing still the 0 is annoying is that normal ?
     
  13. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    O's just seem like there a pain in the ass to make perfect.
     
  14. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    november 2006 you joined ??? wtf just noticed that, 6 years and you dont even have a name ?
     
  15. BoostIt

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    Crits? I know i fucked up the 3d on the top of the E and the letters aren't all the same proportion. Not feeling the L or the E, ran out of room on the edge of the paper..just trying to work out my own style

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  16. braxtons a g

    braxtons a g Senior Member

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    A sneak peak of a pack i just sent out, Dont mind that gay shit in the background. lol
    Just trying new stuff out
     
  17. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    I've gotta take a fat shit. mind if i use the sticker as teepee?
     
  18. DaFugg

    DaFugg Senior Member

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    How the hell do you write "SELDOM" on a piece of average sized paper. I'm about to kill myself.
     
  19. braxtons a g

    braxtons a g Senior Member

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    Thats all you partner, Just stick that shit when your finished
     
  20. DaFugg

    DaFugg Senior Member

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    Struggling with the S. not a fan of it in general but I need to widen my ability in writing more than just MK. Lol
    Crits? Btw, exchange.
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