if you are trying to improve, dempo, the advice id give is to not color your work for a while. just stick with black sharpie and pencil. youll get twice as much done... which should lead to quicker improvement. gotta start coloring my older shit, just got a new black sharpie so i can outline fuck ya...
^^Reality- like no-sleep said, just keep practicing and you will see improvement. its good that your practicing lots of different letters but you should pick a name and practice that and try to master it, its still good to experiment with other shit too though, just concentrate mainly on what you write. keep it up Dempo- your letters look cool but i dont really like the coloring in there. the shadowing looks good i think, try to push your self to draw 2-6 sketches each day or something. patience will grow dank- i think that looks sick, the one thing i dont really like is the D but it doesnt look bad, better then what i can do. the streaks looks good and i like the concept with your E and O...the ripped neck character is dope too
@Dank that M and S are poppin' Good shit man. @Dempo very nice. The middle bar of the G maybe should go behind the curving bar on the left? shit idk haha Fucked up this fill.
cred - that E is sick and i like how it matches the C. the D i think looks a lot like an O though Friidom - work on bars and keyboard letters
yeah I should have used a ruler to make my vanishing point lines cleaner and fucked up the line to the leg of my r .... any other crits ?
the O is a no go, loose those lines in the letters. you want to get your letters down before you mess with that. and pic a vanishing point that compliments your piece. id try something to fill the neg space between the P and R. and don't draw your lines all the way to the vanishing point. and there is also no need to use a ruler, looks clean as is
^that looks good, maybe make your O a litttle bit smaller and the circular part on your P, the first bar on your R looks a little crooked. i like those lines u have coming out of the centre point of your o, p and r, the one on the O is a little crooked it looks but thats minor. other then that it looks nice and clean
yea the koper would help with the negative space. Ill have to work on the vanishing point shit that was my first go at it. And the o well fuck an o lol gonna have all kind of fun gettin them down. but thanks for the crits 2 -3 weeks of piecing still the 0 is annoying is that normal ?
Crits? I know i fucked up the 3d on the top of the E and the letters aren't all the same proportion. Not feeling the L or the E, ran out of room on the edge of the paper..just trying to work out my own style View attachment 625737
A sneak peak of a pack i just sent out, Dont mind that gay shit in the background. lol Just trying new stuff out
Struggling with the S. not a fan of it in general but I need to widen my ability in writing more than just MK. Lol Crits? Btw, exchange. View attachment 625742