Naked - Maybe straighten left bar on A just a little bit on your 2 letter then id be nice Kaze - Looks good but dont really like the U Bama - work on your letters more than fills, the top one is too stretched IMO Physh - looks ok but the hanging bars at the bottom make it harder to read Not finished but I thot id post for some crits just incase i dont get online over weekend
Those bar bumps don't look good on every bar lap. Especiall on the bottom of the L and the top of the E
Not sure what you mean but most likely not. Pretty good stuff from you. Just try to clean up your lines.
its a joke man dont get your panties in a bunch. @ kwu thats sick, i love how you always keep the A's real symmetrical.
Looks good. Connect the middle bar of the G to the bottom of the loop of the R so that the letter connections are flush throughout the piece.
had to hold the pages together so the E is miss allighned hipe- the N i small and the E is huge, other than that i like
@ gpers - i like the top one the best, digging that bleeding glow @ 4eyes - letters look good, color idea is cool but it's kinda distracting for me @ kwu - love your style, always so clean @ hipe - like dank said, if those last two letters had consistent size it would look sick, real nice @ dank - really dig that G, N looks kinda big though, clean as always heres this polished turd, i can't keep my hand steady, it's like michael j fox does my outlines
Just make it one movement^ don't go slow and just do it in one fluid movement and never stop outlining in the middle of a curve haha only stop at corners, dont sketch the outline. Dank that R has steeze girls name, oh im so kewl.
The n was supposed to be those 3 bars and the e coming off that third bar but the look didnt pan out ...