wayyyyyyyyyy old haha just found this going through shit

 

Thats sick man, i really like the letters

...not to good at fills so ive just been tryin some things

 

@Someone those 2 are FRESH


Originally I was just drawing Art but then I saw the R and T made an M :|
Not too happy with how the O came out

^and this was made Sept 9, 2011. I only like the "no". Everything else is craptastic

 

no one gave me feedback

 

I'm not sure about the bottom right leg of the R with it being zig-zag

 

Not all graffiti, but other than graff... I haven't had the inspiration to even doodle for more than a year until recently.
Flicks for talk, crits on the SOAM please (The A sucks, what can I do to fix it?)... I need to practice my piecing a lot...

 

All the letters seem to flow from left to right except for the M. It seems to be slanted to the left more
And the non-graff things are sick man

 

Soam, the a looks like its slouching where the s and o look solid. The m gets a little wild. And if I may advise, that tail bit on the s hurts the piece, I'd do away with it. So in short, check your a and m bars, clean it up and keep going
Rush, you need work all around, can't really tell what I'm trying to ell with though, a throw or a solid piece. The s ends bad at the bottom either way. The back leg of the r is too small, I kinda like what you did with the u but the first h looks like a n and the second looks like another r
View attachment 626758 self Crits, bottom L bar is fat, p is a bit wild compared to the rest, if I missed anything let me know!

 

I write rasn lol

 

Your n looks like an r then ha

 

yeh it looks more like Rush than Rasn. The A looks a lot like a U

 

dafugg - the P is too small all round, id make the horizontal bar of the L lie flat and have the P lean back into it a bit, and make the bottom curves of the H bars the same as the top, dont get too big,
RASN - personally it looks like a throwie style thats trying too hard, learn your bars man

 

Makes sense since you gave no one feedback either.

 

@drugs, those be throwies son, if you want better advice with those put them in the throwies section.
@soam, those characters are bomb! Calm that M down a bit, it looks too slouchy and blobish in my opinion.
@HLP, fatten that P up a bit more, I would lose the curves on the bottom of the H and structure the ends of your bars a bit more.
@Taro, sick effects man, I would chill with those extensions though. You've got hella drawing steez, that's for sure.
I fucked up my 3d pretty badly, its too much on the back of the letters and not enough on the bottoms, other than that critz? I also slanted more to the left as my sketch went on, my E's are way off. Additionally, I could use some advice regarding the U.
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still gettin up i see

 

u know he is

lolololol

 

Ahahahaha oh wow...