Sick - colours are nice work on the letters Blunt - Go simpler, way simpler - use keyboard letters or now. Meas - Like the style, maybe make letters straighter and same width/height for now.
that first apes is nice, the only thing is i think the a looks kinda outa place though. might be because its not as wide as the other letters. and a little over board with the cracks, but it looks nice gasr, thats some fresh ass shit. can i get some crits?