Yo so I did a quick one (it was my second attempt) to show u some basics of what you're missing. First of all YOU need to thicken your outlines from now on even just a bit it overall makes things stand out more and u will get props for it. You also need to use bars properly, I'm surprised after looking at so much of your stuff I didn't realise how fucked up your bars are. I tried to stay completely with the bars you used but it was a mess (however I understand u freestyled it) because the bars are shit Which is where your handstyle comes in, anyway u need to perfect that shit or just get better with it because that's what makes the pieces look decent overall. If your handstyle (which makes up your bars) is shit essentially your piece will look shit too. This is pretty much why everyone said to do simples/ straights because it's hard to fuck up the bars if u are doing simples, and gives u a chance to play with bar widths. Which is my last tip, having consistent bar widths. All of your pieces (if u can call them that) have almost never had consistent bars widths which is another essential when you're a toy. Perfecting those will always make shitty bars look decent enough Also I don't believe u have been doing this for 10 years u just think u have, I would have said the same thing about 6 years ago which is when I actually started and I've improved a shit tonne after I went back to doing simples/ straights/ keyboard letters)
Mine was literally a pen sketch too lol Just to give u an idea here's some of my old trashy shit that I thought was top notch at the time. Looking back now I realise how trash they were This was about 5-6 years ago I think
https://i.imgur.com/265yhRD.jpg And me doodling in religious studies: https://i.imgur.com/CI9ZKNx.jpg What do u guys think
elbow bro I been in the game for like ten years I have done plenty of simples I just really suck at extensions I have a simple piece I will post from back in the day in a while or maybe tomorrow don't feel like hooking up the cam right now
U only think u been doing this 10 years, if your simples were any good your other shit would be too, trust me u not even in the game yet whoever convinced you, that u were was lying
naw i used to be better trust me its just I got passed out when I was high one time and kinda lost the pen control I had I used to be able to freehand some dope ass shit back in the day I have slowly gotten worse
I can clearly see u were better back then, however your bars were still shit and your outlines were weak. But the characters almost look decent and that 12oz lettering is the best thing you've ever posted we wanna see more of that shit. When u actually get good at that kind of stuff everything else comes a little more natural I guess, also by any chance have u read the new to graffiti thread, there's some helpful shit in there
aww cool man thanks for the encouragement yeah i like the 12 oz ones and if it makes me any better i will try doing some more simples i just wanna have a wildstyle but with less arrows that is like the only extensions i can ever think of when i do it but i just want a piece that's wildstyle that sticks out in all directions without looking goofy as fuck
man actually i am waiting on 12ozprophet to unban me i really like that website i bought a couple shirts and my friends bought some and we got a crew down here called the 12ozprophets our colors are red and black.We dont rep a side or any star we do wear bandanas like i got this black and red bandana that is huge and i wear that bitch out my pocket.The other day i was wearing it at wal mart and forgot about the shit first thought is im probably a blood or latin count.
I smoked a blunt lik an hour ago an now im tripping out seeing shit on my walls and stuff i wish i had the coordination to draw whatt im seeing right now the only thing i could manage to draw that im seeing right now is a playboy bunny lol im high asf