i agree, i woulda done your fly throwups in different colors and sizes, in the corner. good concept though
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looks like kay just beat this video game its not always intentional but whats more being said is come up with something a little more creative ad more to it then keeping it as simple as it is. my 2 cents
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work in progress [Broken External Image]:http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/5134/img2432aw2.jpg . gonna add some shading to the blue bubbles and gooey things ...do some type of "force field" border around the piece .. some diff shades of blue on the letters mixed with some green might do some brush work .. make it a little abstract try to regain some composure all around ..