You should make the edges look more like tearing through crap then just straight plain outline...thatd b cool imo
Im not voting, because news would own once he gets that style down a little smoother, with better letter definition
steel. i thought news was more creative, but his letters need a little bit more work. to steel: if you're gonna do an overdone style, try to and make it stand out.
news got HANDLED and to all the dudes preaching originality, youve gotta learn the basics first. you dont hop right into cubism without learning traditional painting/drawing. news said hed only been writing 6 months, so all he should be doing now are simples and straights.