the letters alone look ok, but maybe if u kicked out the bottom of the S like the R does, and slant ur letters to where the angles are about the same itd look better that way, and the bottom of the L should at least have more bar on the right than the left in my opinion... u gots some skilz doe...
word i sees you ill try to make everythin more even next battle mini is a horrible word tho, just sayin. 2 i's and its too short
^it was "smoke break" so maybe we should make it "brake" here is an idea just use the letters in any order u want just as long as you use b r e a and k