Yeah just post a piece before the due date

 

that shit is sick dude, ill have mine up in a little while. this is my first time ever doin somethin like this though so itll probably suck compared to that lol

 

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this is so tempting, but I think I'm gonna sit these few rounds out... fuckin new job makes it impossible for me to have time to sketch >.<

 

thtas why i just freestyle some shit puttin on some effects.
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i got nothin to do fills with man, this sucks lol, ive got a few highlighers and colored pens so i hope it doesnt come out too shitty

 

not the best.. just got some new markers figured i'd put somethin together

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Plank that "E" is pretty fresh... Chad's piece is fire

 

sorry i don't have any markers atm but i tried.
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Heres my piece, took a picture and scanned id, not sure which turned out better. Wish i had something to do a fill tried sorta with the background but i don't really like it that much. First think i've done for something like this/in a whiiiiile so try not to be too harsh, although crits are welcome.

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go simple ian and b-town... VERRRY simple
you're complicating things, trying to accomplish 3rd stage techniques before mastering stages 1 and 2... so go back to the basics. practice your letter structure and bar compatibility.
props for participating and giving it a shot though...
for practice, look at some of REWT and ZEWL's silver straight letter pieces in the toy bombs/pieces thread
master that style, and then move on up from there.

hope this was helpful

 

Alright ill check it out. Anything specifically wrong with this piece though?

 

no, its all wrong and just maaad ugly. youll recognize...

 

Damn, harsh man.

 

The bars are two wild bro... The extensions coming out of the letters are bad...
I like da Charlie brown shirt you got going in the back of it though

 

haha, thanks for the constructive criticism. I've really not had much experience with writing or anything but i've always liked it. your piece is real nice too, definately my favorite one so far

 

acrsk you def are getting my vote.
threw some HEAT at it with this one
NOICE
intense 3d would be nice on the next one
...if you can pull it off that is