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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Sep 6, 2004.

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  1. gilt

    gilt Senior Member

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    kinda wack if you ask me
     
  2. EC_Sensi

    EC_Sensi New Member

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    Would you care to elaborate, Glit? Maybe i shoulda listed "constructive crit." :)
     
  3. sika_2002

    sika_2002 Elite Member

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    need to practice your handstyle
     
  4. SaDiStIc

    SaDiStIc Member

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    Sitting here reading this smoking a joint and the fuickin Royal Canadian Mounted Police give me a shout about some bullshit restorative justice meetings before I have to go paint over graffitti.... whack!

    <_<
     
  5. EC_Sensi

    EC_Sensi New Member

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    Yeah i'd have to agree with you there, haha I just started on that... I've got to work on pretty much everything, but who shouldn't.
     
  6. sink

    sink Senior Member

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    i take scraps of paper, date them and keep them in a usps sketch envelope, someday i can look back on them. sensi- practice practice practice
    [Broken External Image]:http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00484834f00000007.jpg
    my first decent hand, any tips?
    over the weekend im getting some wood and cans, ill be back with flicks of my first paintings more detailed than a shitty hand i did a long time ago
     
  7. Lady VA

    Lady VA Member

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    hey jus found this thread. dunno if this ? was asked b4, but i can't read 46 pages. i only got thru 6 of em. anywayz, i jus wanna kno how yall keep lines clean. mine alwayz cumz out hazy. ANY help wood b koo.
     
  8. kyer

    kyer Senior Member

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    uhh isnt the name "BRICK" in that handstyle battle thread......... so ur the 1 whos trying to bite styles...
     
  9. DNA

    DNA Elite Member

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    u a girl? the name LADY VA hints to it.




    here is a bettered(i think) version of the ne i posted on the last page
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  10. CaSoNe

    CaSoNe Elite Member

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    yo my advice just stop piecing for now...i look at ur letter stucture in that...if u cant do plain letters then dont piece...those arrows are ugly and those stars are homo
     
  11. DNA

    DNA Elite Member

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    looks to mw like we have a little Car2n on ur hands :p

    thanx :blink:
     
  12. sokor

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    i posted these flicks in blackbook section.

    'cept it isn't much for critique, people just take it as eye candy.

    so i'm posting here for some critique



    my first attempt at this style.

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    tried again at the style ( says dNas. word that my friend chose for 'battle' during bio class )

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    just some crit for DNA.

    your letters are there, it's not really the structure that's a problem, cause your letters are obviously 'readable.'

    the problem is they're out of proportion. that doesn't mean make everything the same width, it's just saying look at your letters, and see what's wrong with it before you ask for criticism from other people.

    your K isn't bad. your A's could do with practice. what i meant with the proportioning was your R and M. yeah, they look like R's and M's, but they don't look RIGHT. if you know what i'm saying. go by what you FEEL.
     
  13. element503

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    u a girl? the name LADY VA hints to it.




    here is a bettered(i think) version of the ne i posted on the last page
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    yea dont do a peice. how about practice throwies then build up. thats what i do. throwies are real fun too.
     
  14. DNA

    DNA Elite Member

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    yeah, im not liking my A's at all, i see what you mean by the letters being out of propotrion and i will work on that.

    as for yours.
    i like the 2nd one more, maybe because the lines are straighter.
     
  15. sokor

    sokor Member

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    yeah.

    first one was my first attempt at the style, so it didn't come out as well. :unsure:

    it scanned weird, paper wasn't put in straight, so i had to edit/rotate it. got twisted in the resizing to add to it.

    i actually knew what i had planned the second one. :)

    i'm so toy mang, :rolleyes: you don' know how toy i be :lol:
     
  16. DNA

    DNA Elite Member

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    were are you from?
     
  17. sokor

    sokor Member

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    why?

    i've lived in a lot of places, and just moved to where i am a year ago.
     
  18. DNA

    DNA Elite Member

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    well, youve got that big North Korea sig, and i wasnt sre if you lived in N. Korea.
     
  19. sokor

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    naw, i don't live in north korea.

    i've been south korea, vancouver, south carolina, montral, LA, new york, seattle.

    i move every couple years.

    i'm in the states now. i'd rather live in canada.
     
  20. sika_2002

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    i like ur piece sokor, add colour and it will look nice