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im lookin for some tips?

 

minus the "?" for some reason i thouhgt i was writing a question

 

the first one is alright, the second one is too....... complicated? idk i dont like ones that i have to really really look to see what it says. i cant event make out any letters in the 2nd one

 

dna wow, it looks like your trying to bite she's eurotrash.. but you just made it look like US Sewage lol

 

i had done this back in like 7th grade, then stop doin graffiti for a while, and i'm coming back.
so i want sum tips from "experienced" writters to tell me everything i did wrong, cuz now this looks like crap :huh: i even forgot what it says

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is there letter structer in that at all? start simple, cause that looks absurd.

 

it says rpjas, cause you wrote rpjas in reg letters above it

 

to everone who just posted listen up zombie pawn AND dna

first off to dna you should know better you need letter strusture u came all this way to throw it all away car2n does have apoint dont try to due euro trash if your going to do euro go with some sicker stlyes look up heads liek sticker, cerone,aroe you know sipmle but dope but that faze peice u did is stright up HORRIBLE i dont know where u were goin with it but you'll naver make a good style out of that

pawn your first one has a nice fill btu too many add ons, your second one..... it HORRIBLE u cant even tell theres letters you 3ed ones the best but dont over lap your letter liek you did on the "p" but its read able and better then the other 2 also see how much the 3d make a diffrence if u keep on doing stright plain readable letter youll get more respect

zombi ok there no letters there your 3d should come out more then that too but u got the 3d in the right spots just not enuf of it and your missing it in a few spots, but WAY too many add ons, dont ever use an arrow unless your from the old school or have a SUPER clean style which u wont have for may a another 5 years but read what i wrote to the other and youll know what i woul tell u cas your in the same spot as them winner of the sketches on page 70 pawn with his resect it peice

help was brought to you today by
Gesus who holdin it down comin to a town neer u

 

thank you gesus, i will look those up via google right now!

 

no problem its what im here for

 

daniel duffy... do you have nothing else to do.... go fuck up another thread... leave mine alone.... no one wants to hear your wack ass comments.. if your gonna post here, atleast "share knowledge"...

 

who's daniel duffy?

 

Car2nist is Daniel Duffy, after and during the Car2nist hating pahse he was referred to as 'Daniel' or 'Daniel Duffy' or 'faggot' or the likes.

 

first one liner tag, says 'EU' short for 'Euro'
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regular tag that says 'euro'
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i see no E or U in that first one ... looks like a flower

 

is that first one a joke?

 

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i like the 2nd one alot.

 

go simple please.