thanks a lot guys.

 

Define your letters more, and get rid of those big holes, and played out e.

 

the e with the mouth and shit??yeah thats exactly what i was thinking that it was a bit too used.and what do you meen define my letters??like make them more noticable and reconigzable.

 

Exactly. The R and E on your first throw look the same, and the S is pretty similar aswell.

 

more defined and noticeable like this [Broken External Image]:http://img117.exs.cx/img117/65/ge2.jpg

but i would sudgest NOT using teardrop letter there wack ass fuck with 96% of all writers i rarely see people who can pull them off decently enough to get my respect

 

jus got bak from painting some lil shit

 

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half assed paint rendition of a throwie

 

if that pic dosent show up heres the link
http://tinypic.com/15eg04

 

ouch.... make your letters a lil bot more visable your "v" u cant even tell its a v

 

yo gesus tellme
bout ma quikie

 

well thats just a shitty paint rendition.once i get my goddamn camera to work on my computer ill post some shits thats better

 

yeah i see some hand styles that are really hard to read because of the way they try to combine two letter in one...its really wack...just write each letter out then try adding shit from there.

 

aiight thnx

 

Thanks man

 

no problem u deserve is cas u listen and take advice

 

im doin a school report right now and after every page i just fuck around with some throws n shit so ill probly have a few more comin soon

SANE
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yo should i use more color such as the fill then the letters then a brighter outline.

 

that looks like it says 'sare' not 'sane'



and i posted this in 'Canvases' but i think i will get more feed back here in Toy Story
any help would be nice
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i did this a while ago when i was just startin so w/e

sike!
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