jetpack - ok flow, bad structure thow. fize - get a better pic, and practice a lot. once - not bad but get rid of the frilly shit, thats better for pieces. mas - start over, go simple, either use a smaller tipped marker or write it bigger. [Broken External Image]:http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/7.jpg new name...look at the tags. crits pleazzzzzzzzz
lol theyre basically the same... the fisrt one looks doper because it's done in marker and a bit cleaner ... try to keep the letters the same size and on one line the next time though, it looks like its on a slope compared to the underline...
mas-Go simple and work up with a slow style while maintaining flow. aspek-Nice style, work on proportions a bit and the tilt of the letters. lookin nice tho. Crits please
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AHEM, I'd cram the letters more tightly so it doesn't look so loose. ASPEK, It's looking pretty dope. The only thing I'm not feeling is the K.
Thanks man i'll be sure to do that. What do you think of the letters tho....seeing a philly handstyle in progress?
2nd bump for: talk&lack of crits. Helpful crits much appreciated! ASPEK; shits nice, love your style although I think the extension off the A or the K needs fixing. AHEM; ready for some taller+closer ones?
crits? Shuk make your s the same size as everything else aspek Dope. ahem push your letters in closer mas Make your letters flow together You're doing every letter as an individual you need to look at how the letters look compared next to each other
To those that haven't been critting.. please give crits to receive.. cause I'm damn hungry for 'em and have been critting. SHUK: rotate that S around a bit to match how the other letters are sitting YARBLES: not feeling that underline my friend
HEMP; haha nice name nice drips [Broken External Image]:http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7595/oyzterae4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1227/fghru5.jpg
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Uve gotten alot better since that last time i saw ur shit. Keep it up. I always love seein 2 tone solid tags.