kasper - lose the halo's and quotes and shit just focus on making the lettering flow more for now wack but whatever sorry for the sizing its a cell pic
Seal- feelin it mar- don't do the extra arch on the m, and don't put that arm thing on the r. Also try to put the letter closer together and make em flow. Here's my new handie. It says somber
Seal: Solid start. develop it. Maybe make the top of the a curved? That handy might look better with a fatter line so the letter are kind of mushed together a little more. May just be my personal style. Just a thought though. Mar: Back to basics, man. Not feeling any part of it. Keep trying. Somber: I've said this about previous hands from you. Too.Cramped. You B is all but lost in this handstyle. I really don't dig that curl on the bottom of the S. I am a fan of the cholo R. I also wouldn't curl that bar either, but it may be safe to say that that type of R doesn't fit in the style you may be trying to achieve. I also may just be talking out of my ass.
somber you just gotta space that shit out sneak lose all the bullshit around it and make your letters the same size
bored to shit b4 goin to dinner [Broken External Image]:http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/9096/tag.png
yea i thought itd match better if i made em streched like the L and E... i dunno, ill save the rest for the 'battle' hah the 3 way
sneak start simpler, and that limes gonna win, looks good hand ive been doing, r's big but whatever View attachment 533064
My entry. Roes, I critted yours in Tot Black Books. Zooky, I digggg. I don't like how big that E is compared to the rest, and I don't like the arrow coming off of it. If you would have made it a straight bottom, it'd be perfect.