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Harvey - The H and A are good, though the rest of the letters need a little more. Try just screwing around with the letters.

Once again, please crit.

 

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new style. i played a little with the s and the f. crit and help.

 

Ya'll need to start critting others. Shit guys, I've asked for crits 3 times got none and you guys except crits. Let's go boys.

 

im not giving crits because i dont think im good enough....i dont wanna give othher artists bad tips. just sayin when im better ill give a lot of crits to help others.

 

what does your tag say...

 

its lookin like it says sifen maybe pronounce it (seven) idk

 

sifen go simple and RAHK? go simple

 

nice 1 liner nose but the z needs a lil work

 

can some one do a simple tag of a sifen coz my simple kinda looks shitty i dont wanna post it

 

Rahk I think yrs is okay, but I really don't like that R. I do like the K and A a lot though. Maybe try to change something with the R.

I'm having some trouble figuring out what to do with my other letters. Any suggestions?

 

As my good friend once told me - just make keep looking at graffiti. You gotta figure it out from somewhere, then you figure out yr own shit. And he is mad good

 

hey does it say bahk? and get rid of the bar on the bottom of ur peice it makes the A look like a B

 

k i went simpler this time like nose2 said. is it better? rahk...go simple

 

RAHK- Work on smoothing your letters a bit. That pointy R isn't working out. Also remember to keep your width consistent to make that kinda style pop. And you might want to try to squeeze them together. Play around with it. You still have progress to make.

Sifen- Put the S from the left hand on the right hand and that would be dope. It isn't bad. Keep developing!

I don't feel the bottom hand so much but I kinda like the top

 

nouv always bringin out the steazy hands...you made the first one look like a brush almost

 

hey i had to change my tag so i chose PURE give me crits on the one that you think is best and if u dont wanna give crits then pls give me the number of which one is best

 

Thanks for the crits. I really apreciate the guy above me, cause I don't agree with the 'Keep it simple' cause like tbh I think mine is fucking simple, it's pretty generetic letters besides R and K and the R and K are similiar to create that effect. The A is a A... the H is literaslly just like a keyboard H. anyways, thanks for the crits.

kthanxbai

 

thanks for the crit nouv. is this what you meant?, switching the s. thanks again man. crit again i wanna see what i can do with this thing