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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. nah!

    nah! Banned

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    i like except for the gaps next to the t's
     
  2. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    oh yeah task that's true, usually I do some color correction on my photos so that they look the way they are in real life. because i use a cell phone cam that makes everything look low contrast. no life at all in the original photos, but that's not the way it is in real life :) but i didnt really know that it's noticeable
     
  3. nah!

    nah! Banned

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    ok now crit my tagz (i put a z so it sounds more streetz)
     
  4. Task977

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  5. wackiwo

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  6. unknown--

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    i did a simple one coz everyone said simple is better so here yah go, crit also please
     
  7. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    the s needs word and connecting the letters if and en doesn't look smooth or natural dont force it.
     
  8. skinaone

    skinaone Elite Member

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    jest insted of putting JESTTWO put jesTwo idk its a good idea and put the Tcloser
     
  9. pointman

    pointman Senior Member

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    The old shimmy the wall and jump the rail trick haha

    Train flick has an old krew tag on the ledge got other flicks but dont really wanna post em from that area
     

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  10. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    is there supposta be a glums tag somewhere in the second flic?
     
  11. unknown--

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  12. RAPP

    RAPP Member

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    Where do I need to improve?

    Edit: Sorry for the big ass image, forgot to scale it.
     

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  13. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    uuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhh whats it say?
     
  14. RAPP

    RAPP Member

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    RAPP, I take it breaking the traditional mode isnt very smart?
     
  15. FACTone

    FACTone Member

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    @RAPP it's bad go simpel keyboard
     
  16. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    that's alright^ just use the regular upper case T without any modifications
     
  17. unknown--

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    fact use a regular T

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  18. ribcage

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    @Rapp, for you straying from the "traditional" way is too much . Start by closing your letters, they're all open (your lines arent touching). Space your letters out more, all of yours are layed on top of eachother. looks bad, and makes it unreadable.

    @Fact, your letters dont look like they fit in the same style. Your F is all curved and then your A has a point, and then your C is curved. Your T is just bad. I suggest using the same kind of F just extenuate line corners ya digg? Hands are about your hand movement, handstyle is based upon how you like to move your Hand to make the letters look like good letters. thats why starting simple helps you in the long run. But starting simple for hands doesnt exactly mean keyboard letters. Usually the reason why people tell someone to do keyboard letters is because keyboard letters dont have extensions and weird curves to them... hope that helps

    @sifen, shits weak, i think your other stuff was a little better. Idk why you put little loops in all your letters... looks wack. Doesnt hurt to expirement i guess... in all the extra white space on that paper id do that hand 50 more times tweaking it a bit, until there is literally no white left
     
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  19. pointman

    pointman Senior Member

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    Chill trackside area need some good sketches down first, some random tags on the pillars
     

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  20. FACTone

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    @point some cats form my town told me my tag is decent but i can see your point will work on it :p