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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. ONELUV

    ONELUV Member

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  2. BRER

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    @Skin that's dope yo. I'm really feelin it.
    @Jekl try something other than a backwards J for your L. The way you're doing it is not very good. I'm not feeling any of those other than the J in 2, maybe the E in 3. Ks and Ls still need a lot of work.
    @Saven 1,2, & 5 are basically the same thing. Maybe try a lowercase A w/ the lowercase E. The Ss don't seem right to me, maybe its the double curl. I dig the N in 3.
    @ONELUV I like it, but does it say troz or trez?

    I had a name change. I didn't like the double R so I wanted to do Bear, but s/he is already really good and has some insane burners. So I chose bare.
    Any critz for my shitty handstyle?
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  3. skinaone

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    bare they all kinda suck but number 2 is a winner just fix the A R and the e need a bit of work but not bad
     
  4. jdub

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    skin- thats dope as hell man
    jekl- your e and k are the weakest they both need alot of work
    saven- i like numba 5 but try doin sumthin with the v
    bare- numba 2 and 4 are the best imo

    flick for talkin
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  5. Raiders9406

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    Damn, theres some great talent right off the bat in here, congrats guys.

    As for me, I'm a little torn between 'Coke 45' seeing as theres already a coke out there, he's a toy too though. But still..
    And the other is 'Ragi', a shortened version of 'Bragi', the Norse god of poetry, which reminds me of graffiti writing, also I like poetry, haha.

    Got some pictures of both, be harsh please, this is my third day of writing.
     

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  6. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    you like the raiders mang? .....those tags is weak, start by connecting your shit(lines)
     
  7. BRER

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    ^ This sounds harsh, but start over. Do simple letters. Try to make it look like this ---> RAGI. Don't try anything fancy until you understand how each of the letters work. I'd suggest looking at a shit ton of pictures and videos of tags online, or even walk around town and notice tags. Find ones that you like and try to see what it is you like about it. Once you can write your name simply and legibly then you should work on different styles of letters. But until then stick to simple things like the letters on you keyboard.
     
  8. Raiders9406

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    haha nah I don't.


    And thanks brer, what do you mean by understanding how thy work? Why can't I just jump in and write what I feel looks cool? And I mean this from a scholarly standpoint, not being rude and telling you to fu.. off, lol.
     
  9. ribcage

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    you want me to baby him through walls of text in hopes he will become king?

    awww too bad

    1 line+some weak shit
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  10. Raiders9406

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    Yeah I wouldn't wnat you to baby me either, so thank you. WHat would you recommend I do to improve I've been writing 'keybord' style 'Ragi' and what not for a long while now.
     
  11. ribcage

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    play around with a chisel tip, practice hand movements, watch calligraphy videos/ what ever dude^ up there said
     
  12. unknown--

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  13. skinaone

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    ^better but take those /// /// off work on the S i F and R e is pretty good
     
  14. dankbudz

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    unknown,just wondering, but why did you outline your handstyle?

    got crits? been trying to get my N's like the 2nd one consistenly. its a bitch
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  15. TastyMcNasty

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    recent handies... what yall think?
     

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  16. skinaone

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    try simpler letters homie that shits too wild
     
  17. Armored Bulletz

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    on the bottom half of your s, dont make it so wide. dont dot your i at all. capitalize your F. on the bottom half of your e, make it curve in more. your r isn't that bad. instead of making the three quotations and an arrow, just make a quick circle over your f i guess.
     
  18. sir.to.you.

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  19. skinaone

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