@sifen yo I think your F has improved a lot, keep doin it similar to the top 1. Id dash it as if its lower case tho, adds a little more visually, and can take up some space btween the F and I and eventually you can work in the dash as part of the I and see if that works
your E would look better with out that vertical dash at the top, your O is seriuosly hurting on both, and your S is bad on both. Id also suggest doin a Straight line to cross your T on the first 1 in blue, the other 1 is fine.
TEOS- Lose those extensions. That T shouldn't go across the whole word. Lose the extensions. START SIMPLE!
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The only way to improve is to practice.. Try starting your letters small and progressivly make them gain in size.. Also slanting the peters back looks good \ like the way that lunr is slanting
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i personally dig that phat, the right triple quotation could be closer together like the left one but other than that it looks good IMO
Okay so I'm back with some, what I hope to be, better tags. I'm personally liking 1, 2, 11, 12. And I know most, if not all, of these reak of toy. Let me know how you guys feel. Be harsh.
Yeah after I posted this I wrote some more closer together and realized how much better it looks,lol. I think I tried to make it flow? The pointed letters, I made point in the same direction. Or am I missing the actual meaning of Flow?