Not diggin the U, maybe get rid of the hook on the left of it, or making it lower case. rest of it is pretty dope though except i don't get what that little thing in the R is supposed to be.

 

@haezr ya i guess, just do whatever you gonna do it literally 1000 times.

 

cant read that

eRCg?

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dont connect the start of the s to the middle of the s

 

Yeah dude, the way I thought of saying it was different than the way I typed it. I meant to say that worrying about getting his handstyle to a more technical caliber wouldn't necessarily be a waste of time, but nothing to fuss over. Its a timely process. I spent over a week writing my name to get to my mediocre tag that I'm satisfied with. Plus, there's nothing wrong with keeping it simple.

Eros - my last piece of advice would be if you want to keep trying, use simple your simple letters and then flare one to give it some style. Like keep ERO simple and make that S fucking nuts. Or the E. Whatever you like.

 

thx for the crits

the bit in the r @ the end? if so its a 1

 

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just messing around @ after drawing smth new up
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I fixed it, how is it now guys?

 

@ISHO-Ummm....ill prolly be hated on for even giving you critic' but that literally looks like scribble...

 

I agree man, not even legible.

 

isho go keybord letters like this I S H O cause that looks really bad and when you get better your gunna wish you never painted that trust me get a noteboke or 2 and fill em up with isho in KEYBORD letters cause thats the only way your gunna get better.
dont go painting until you atleast fill up 2 notbooks of your tag. im not trying to be a dick just saying the truth and trying to help so dont think im trying to be a dick

 

the fuck is that thing next to what i assume is an 'I' supposed to be?

 

Troopskie- your yellow tag on the last page looks good if you fixed the R, it turned into a B. Also the first one that you posted later is clean, try to progress on that one.

 

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Trying some different/new stuff.
Crits? Better than my last post? Do I have any hope lol

 

gettign better but try to make them flow a bit more
put extencions on the letters

 

fuck editing my old post
i had to boost the contrast and a tiny bit of saturation cause i used a highlight for the bottom ones
kind of a bitch to see so feel free to just crit the black one.

 

hi everyone im new PPP there my tag what you guys think of it

IMG000076 par jackwriter, sur Flickr

 

Give the J more curve and the K is funky. PS I know you from PureGraffiti. Haha, this site is better imo.

And seder that S is fucking sick. Thats the one. If anything, work on your R.

 

haha ace true but i dont know you ? its better ?

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