Hapa, good to see you are starting SIMPLE (unlike 70% of the toys..) but i agree with syn, it looks like you crossed your self out mate, H is an easy letter, make the bars just a bit bent or one a bit longer than the other, A is just like an H but closed at the top.. P you get to work on on your own .

EDIT: And make sure your bars all go the same direction!!
EG: >>>>> or <<<<< but NEVER ><>><><><> if ya get what im saying..

 

Snok, when im not on an iphone i will show you..

 

some bs.
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them crayola markers go hard, nawmeen.

 

one more, for a battle.
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grimey stee^

 

norfsuthr - rite on. the i is the shit letter of the name. ill work on the generic-ness of it

 

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exchange for a friend

 

Thanks a ton for the crits guys. But heres what I have now.. Not a ton better I know, Im just having trouble with inspiration for the forming of the letters.

I know its not a huge improvement but i think its going towards more of that curvy look I guess

 

btw these are just a chisel sharpie

 

nawwwwwwwwwwwwww man, just try to write it in more basic letters

 

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For the next battle. Crits on the N specifically? I think i lost it's structure a little trying to make the loop to match the A.

Hapa I'm gonna do some example for you soonish..

 

That last dana looks ok ^. Pink setzie tag is aight too. Dana throws are wack, but props on getting up.

 

@norfsuthr That'd be awesome

 

here is a tag i did with a marker
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and here we were all wondering wtf was that a photo of... thank you for that precise explanation






really

 

nice,but work on hand control. but not bad

 

The opposite of this.

 

I have been trying to make this work for a week.. How can I make it better?? Crit??