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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    seder: on that yellow highlighter page the tall boys on the bottom left are dope. try doing your R with a horozontal piece under the circle and bring the leg back in. I think it will give it more symetry. I'm loving it though. Your hands are coming on nice.
     
  2. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    thanks man, changing the name though, so I'm tryna figure something nice out for this...

    the E should been pulled in, and probably still woulda looks like poop
     

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  3. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    yo dank, i still havent gotten around to that exchange of yours. want me to do a seldom piece instead?
     
  4. notmikegiant

    notmikegiant Senior Member

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    @ dank - sucks you changed your name, loved those simples, I prefer the style with the red pen page, personally.

    trying to make it more simplistic, i know theres some unnecessary extensions but im just throwing shit at the wall and seeing what sticks. crits are always appreciated, wrote my buddies name phase one to get the hang of other letters, for the record hes well aware of everyone who writes phase

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    forgot to mention, i like the bottom right bar on the x flaring out, a simple x just feels boring to me
     
  5. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    everything's gonna feel boring to you when you're just starting out, every beginner wants to rock a T-kid wildstyle at the end of his first week of paper practice. but the truth is that bearing with boring simple styles for as long as needed is that price to pay if you're after perfection. all the pros paid it... every good guy here on the forums has paid it. I am constantly paying it. and you sure arent going to get a freebie coz u managed to spend 3 days in a row without poopies in your diapers... so join the club and get ready for a storm of crits that you better accept for your own good

    /morningrant
     
  6. SkateJunt

    SkateJunt Senior Member

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  7. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Do it in one motion. I can tell by the top points of your letters that you're doing them separately.

    Sorry guys, I like the curved M :cool:

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  8. snob

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    Crits please :)
    and go easy on me this is my very first try.
     
  9. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    mues that ES is steeze. but that M.........
     
  10. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    yeah boy you got it down down dowwwwn dude... nice shit, mn nice.
    but I insist you at least try the pointed M on paper and show me what it looks like. also you could pronounce the U a bit better, right now it's looking just like a line linking the M and E.. making it MES
     
  11. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    crits?
     

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  12. SkateJunt

    SkateJunt Senior Member

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  13. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Dank I'd fatten up that O to make it even with the D and E's sizes.
     
  14. Coleo

    Coleo Elite Member

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  15. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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  16. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    whats up with people and drawing hearts?

    I've never been able to do S's top to bottom, shits weird.

    but ya, bottom 2 are better than the top one. personally i like the bottom most... and separate the U a tad bit
     
  17. AstoK

    AstoK Member

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    i like the lowercase 'm' mues, looks fresh
     
  18. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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  19. KehmONE

    KehmONE Senior Member

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    I know right?!
    I think it has to do with the way I hold a pen/pencil/marker.
    I just can't go top to bottom, the way that you're supposed to. My hand stops around halfway through the letter and it's awkward for me to continue the curvy flow of the letter that way.
     
  20. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    crits?
    y'all think the L is too undistinguished?
     

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