The E throws off the flow in the last one but also if I did not know what u were writing I would think is spelled out either XySEE or XySuE
Lag: You should be able to rock any marker/pen/lipstick/whatever the fuck with style. Slow down, take your time, write legibly, and give your letters some strenght... They look limp, over stylized with no style, and poorly exicuted. I'm not trying to be an ass hole, but for real. Megr: Work on the g. It's lacking the most. Try a lower case cursive one as well.
Thanks , that's like my first compliment @Faggot: Very clean @Lag: can't tell if the one on the right is a R or B. If it's an R then maybe the left leg could come down some more. Has good spacing tho Was bored: Jaset's was probably the funnest cause my Js kept on looking like Is