if any, id say the lowercase one, but if i were you i would also try and keep your hands upper and lowercase, not both at once ya know
Found an ancient tag from my mentor's toy period. Must have been painted 8-9 years ago. It's nice to see that you will improve if you keep at it.
Tel: You gotta ditch the connections at the top of the letters. Also, put some more flow into your letters. That hand looks like you were tense as hell while doing it. Loosen your hand and just mess around with your tag.
Well if you have to tells us what it says it bad most of the time I say get change the E from the connection of the P and simplify it
Vice: don't connect your p and e like that. Other than that, just keep writing whatever you think of and it'll get there over time. As contrary as it is to say, don't be afraid to experiment despite needing to keep it simple (if that makes any sense). I like to do a few front and back pages of really simple stuff until I get sick of it and then use a page or so to just play round. Some pages end up looking pretty shit, but every now and again you make something that looks half decent. Just keep it up. Starfox: I dig all of those man, dope hands. Only real crit i have is not feeling the loopy x at the end of the top two. There's nothing wrong with it or anything that I can see, I just don't like it that much.either way, looking sweet. Page of playing around in between a few pages of simple name practice. Any crits on these? View attachment 141368
Evak, like the second one down on the left and the "eat shit". Main thing I'd recommend is leveling out your x height on your letters. Thank you for the crits. The loop on the x is a flow thing, always doing it but whether or not I ink it is a matter of mood. Tel : right on man, thanks. Verse: That top right is killing it. Make the E a bit wider and it's perfect. The boxy style is pretty chill too. Don't know where you were going with the other stuff.