i dunno, i liked flak better actually, but thats because the d in dok looked like it was isolated

i also dont think it looks much like a d

 

i wrote flak for about a half day...then changed it to bore....then to sephek

 

although i will say, at first glance it looks like flako

 

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not much different than the last one i posted, but im bored....

 

^ don't connect the E with the S.

 

its too hard not to

 

huh just slow down

 

right, right, but it just works well that way, it 'feels' right, ya know?

but besides that, anything else?

 

just keep workin on it bro.

 

Try to liven the K up a bit, here's my stab at "mesk"

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haha, you tagged the tag...


ok, thanks for the advice y'all

 

Yeah lol, just mess around with the K a bit since its the last letter and you've got room.

 

I did a mesk for you too, but then saw that esol posted one up, so I didn't bother posting it, let me know if you want to see it.

 

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That's not too bad. Try using a chisel tip to do it, and try writing it a bit faster, looks like you've written it pretty slowly by how dark the ink is in some places. And try it without the stars too.

 

well i suck azz at t's so i took it out...besides i sorta planned on making a ? at the end instead of the ever so commin 1 or one...so taht it would be like questioning sanity ro sum shiit iunno

 

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Try removing the halo, the quote mark things, the massive extention on the 's', the underline, the arrow, and the star thing. And raise the bar of the 'T' up so it's not cutting through letters.

Apart from that it's ok, although I don't know if the third to last letter is an 'n' or a 'D'.

HTH.

 

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