uknooo like extensions and shitt.. ya sausagehead. like toppings to the piece to make it all chedda and less crusty
not thread worthy. tighten up that outline and drop the extensions and you have a clean simp that would be thread worthy. The black low lights dont make any sense on the M and the O.and u missed some spots on the other letters. typically highlights an low lights dont belong in the same piece either, but to each there own. in this case u went overboard for sure doing white highlights black low lights and low light in the 3d so theres the ticky tack stuff. the letter structure of the small bar coming out of the F, god awful extension in the O, the weird thing going on the top left of R, the top middle of R, the weak unfinished leg of the R going into the M, and the extension on the right bar of the m is why its not thread worthy
dam i just taped it to my roll of toilet paper after reading that. forreal thoh those are the best krits ive recieved. and I aknowledge half em before you said it. Imma try a second post to get me off the 1:1 vote or atleast for the sake of real crits finally
Some crits on this would be appreciated, I changed the E. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/e339c95f-46b0-4ff9-9d8d-915a7aca9010.jpg Here's also a hand style for Bugs' battle. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo on 12-17-15 at 9.52 PM.jpg
your L looks like a C. Id try fuckin around to make some negative space to distinguish the L somehow. ima red line it for you
Yo, I'm down. Eats. What's your word? Edit: Nvm, just scrolled up a bit. I haven't fucked with an M much at all. Or L's Eh, oh well. Second edit: Yo, can I post here?
Here you go Eats, hope you like it. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo on 12-19-15 at 11.14 PM.jpg Here's a tweaked version of my throw up. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo on 12-18-15 at 2.45 PM.jpg
Aewsome, thanks man. I love the simplicity of your throw. It has a great appeal to it. Also, your M is on point.
Pictures for Critters if this stuff isnt good enough for this thread let me know i should have a youtube vid up soon
gettin there. some things you need to work on. if that sketch was black and white i'd say its not worthy due to some shaky line work... but youve seduced me with color so id say its a maybe. your v on the paint"(bttom black and white) is stale as fuck. you should of left that e to s connection out. youve got some good cuts and some bad cuts all over too many to point out. what bugs me the most is the top left horizontal bar of the S. youve got the left most line starting right at the tip of the E, and then that line doesnt match up underneath all in all id say you got a little more work to do until you move on up into this thread. pump out those sketches and you'll be on your way
thanks, i have lots of shit ive sketched n some of its real clean but i try to only post what i paint, ill wait until theres something that i like better than these two I painted another straight last night but no flic yet