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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    bumpity?
    nyze....try using bars...
     
  2. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    QNR is butter.
    W would looks nice if you brought the / bar together with the rest of it a bit more.
    dot on the I is WAY too big
     
  3. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    thanks...ya i got a problem with the dots in the Is dont know why i allways make it huge >>
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    see what i mean
     
  4. Nyze

    Nyze Member

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    lol @ you guys. :)
     
  5. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    Nyze- Why would you post that in here if it was from a couple months ago? Why not post something you did today?
    Jupstick- If your doing intentional unproportional stuff, to me it looks good.

    I don't know if I'm good enough for this thread but I'm not getting crits in the other toy black book thread. If im not good enough I'll go back to the other thread.
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  6. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    dude that T is hurtin SO bad. the right bar on the N is wayyy fat. i would have made the S a clean curve, instead of the defined bars
     
  7. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    that K reminds me of DK
     
  8. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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    lookin better man im glad u distinguished the w more and didnt leave big holes in the midddle of your pieces
     
  9. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    skwint...try going the simplest that you can
    use simple strait bars all sized the same to get your structure down
    anyways i dont know how to get out alittle from this simple shit im doing bettin bored
     
  10. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    just experiment with bending shit and whatnot. trial and error is the only way
     
  11. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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  12. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    that extension off the A makes it look like an R
     
  13. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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    yea I thought that but wanted to make it as close to a one hit piece, i didn't use an eraser and just outlined straight on the pencil, trying to train myself for when i paint more, also it was just for a battle and I can never be assed to go all out on battles

    cheers for the crit tho
     
  14. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Skwint....I really hate the I and T. Sorry. The rest are decent simples to me.
    Qwinz...Feeling the Q especially, seems to get slightly weaker as you go across to the z, but overall I'm still liking it.

    Alts, don't like it as much as some of your stuff, I like really readable stuff usually. But you've always got dope balance in your stuff.

    Some kinda old shit....shit to the sides wasn't me.

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  15. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    letters are pretty bad might wanna sketch more before hittin shit up like that
     
  16. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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    id say give the L a little space to breathe. n your E was kinda hard to distinguish

    good shit as always tho
     
  17. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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    i think u should bring the middle part of the E down a little bit more man
     
  18. Nyze

    Nyze Member

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    that shit looks dope. i like the fact that it's on a WALL. hes right about the E though. and i liek the blue outline.
     
  19. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Haha yeah I dunno why my middle E bars ended up so high. The wall is a bit smaller than it looks. All my bars/proportions/angles are kinda fucked on that one, like I said, pretty old. But I'll quit with the excuses and hit the book.
     
  20. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    he should practice NOT ON A WALL more. so hes finally good when he IS ON A WALL. its not dope and your a clown and fucking send me your handstyle.

    mers - simples alts - sick, but again i would have never found flake in there. a lot of your connections and extensions are indistinguishable from the actual bars.

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    experimenting with this ... dont really like it much. E looks gibbled, especially since the Z obscures the bottom.
     
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