QNR is butter. W would looks nice if you brought the / bar together with the rest of it a bit more. dot on the I is WAY too big
thanks...ya i got a problem with the dots in the Is dont know why i allways make it huge >> see what i mean
Nyze- Why would you post that in here if it was from a couple months ago? Why not post something you did today? Jupstick- If your doing intentional unproportional stuff, to me it looks good. I don't know if I'm good enough for this thread but I'm not getting crits in the other toy black book thread. If im not good enough I'll go back to the other thread.
dude that T is hurtin SO bad. the right bar on the N is wayyy fat. i would have made the S a clean curve, instead of the defined bars
lookin better man im glad u distinguished the w more and didnt leave big holes in the midddle of your pieces
skwint...try going the simplest that you can use simple strait bars all sized the same to get your structure down anyways i dont know how to get out alittle from this simple shit im doing bettin bored
yea I thought that but wanted to make it as close to a one hit piece, i didn't use an eraser and just outlined straight on the pencil, trying to train myself for when i paint more, also it was just for a battle and I can never be assed to go all out on battles cheers for the crit tho
Skwint....I really hate the I and T. Sorry. The rest are decent simples to me. Qwinz...Feeling the Q especially, seems to get slightly weaker as you go across to the z, but overall I'm still liking it. Alts, don't like it as much as some of your stuff, I like really readable stuff usually. But you've always got dope balance in your stuff. Some kinda old shit....shit to the sides wasn't me. View attachment 510992
id say give the L a little space to breathe. n your E was kinda hard to distinguish good shit as always tho
that shit looks dope. i like the fact that it's on a WALL. hes right about the E though. and i liek the blue outline.
Haha yeah I dunno why my middle E bars ended up so high. The wall is a bit smaller than it looks. All my bars/proportions/angles are kinda fucked on that one, like I said, pretty old. But I'll quit with the excuses and hit the book.
he should practice NOT ON A WALL more. so hes finally good when he IS ON A WALL. its not dope and your a clown and fucking send me your handstyle. mers - simples alts - sick, but again i would have never found flake in there. a lot of your connections and extensions are indistinguishable from the actual bars. [Broken External Image]:http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/9991/dsc01342m.jpg experimenting with this ... dont really like it much. E looks gibbled, especially since the Z obscures the bottom.