atesk the only problem i see with the K is the very bottom right, just make the line that goes straight down a little smaller and things should start comin together, i like the rest of it
rip this one apart for me, its a rough copy of a canvas my sister is getiin for her bday.. [Broken External Image]:http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/kiwi.jpg
yea it was folded in my pocket all day at school the papper is kinda bent. left side of the K (3D) is straight it just doesnt look it. but thanks ill keep that in mind.
your L sucks donkey ass but im sure you knew that already. your T is nice but it looks like an I. A and S are strong.
yea man I know lol was a real old sketch I just reworked. that was the first time I have done my own name since January been so busy on exchanges and battles lol
Don't have your 3D going all the way back to the vanishing point, make it cut off so the piece doesn't look like it is coming from off the page. You have a lot of negative space between the letters try and make them closer and more flowing together and try and get the letters to be more consistent in their widths, the dripping bits on the last I don't really work and the letters just need to be a bit more solid and consistent
Werl- I like ur simpz, keep at it, jus the R in this 1 needs 2 b fixed an the L skinner so it can go wit the W E Blunted- noting bad but I don't like ur letters, it feels like it don't got any style flowing with it, keep working with it doe you'll get a style going Alts- I say the L is the only letter slacking but then the rest I like, noting better then simples An zoner I'll get ur exchange done soon, just that I been stuck in bed 4 3days now sick so all I got is my kick
we're all telling you to leave. blunted would destroy you. and please dont put that piece on a canvas. that's a waste of a perfectly good blank canvas.