for a homie thats locked up, i know the Z seems outta place but i meant it to be like that, also not finished btw
Told myself i wasnt going to post on BS but i figure why not get crits while looking, sorry for the shitty fills i have only the ultra fine point sharpies soooooo its fun times with those haha. sorry for the lack of blackbook, my best work comes out in class haha.
nocancontrol: that fuckin steadman lookin character is doooope tezer:for scrap it looks fresher than shit i use brand new shit on , nice seyor: nice start on the two pages crus:nice reflection off the water man , that would be somthin painted , and nice piece also this is a page i been workin on just wanted some crits and maybe some thoughts for a background the clouds are there just as an idea. [Broken External Image]:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7459/fall010.jpg
I like this. Minus the everything in red. (i.e. handprint as well as the top line with drips.) I really like that yellow whispy-ness down at the bottom around your letters. Good canvas.
Feelin your new stuff cocacola' dont draw with markers to often so heres some wackness for the thread.
Im feeling the UNIT of the squint, the s and q for me dont look that good to me, like the q would be hard to tell it was a q if you just glanced. the s isnt too bad but idk just not feeling those two letters the rest is pretty nice.
no up 2 the usual standard mogan....that 'm' is weak sorry...and cocacola you should work on cleaning up your highlights...it detracts from your work yea...like cut back into your outline nd shit