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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. bait

    bait Senior Member

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    Haha that more refers to me xD i barely sketch dont polish ma skills:(
     
  2. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    I secound Alts. Also, blinek, that NVM drawing is pretty solid. Deck is pretty solid too. Speck is okay, letters are a little shaky tho.
     
  3. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    bump!

    crits/suggestions?...meh, i think i should have just left it in pencil
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    good shit bait,wg,bilnek,aspek

    acrsk - the backround,colors, and the teeth on ur letters are cool,but im not really feeling the letters itself

    jiz - looks clean,just dont like the z,or the thing sticking out of it.
     
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  4. AcrsK

    AcrsK Senior Member

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    Thanks for the comments everyone. As of the lettering, I was trying to go with an old classical calligraphy look with my own twist of wildstyle. It's why the gold arrows are so funky. I'll work on my structuring though.

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  5. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    RES4- thanks for da crits bro

    TOFE- looks like you're trying to hard to have that style. The E looks pretty good. The sketch shouldnt really be in here but neither should a lot of people (including me). That style is hard to get down so I guess just keep at it. The bottom part of the T looks bad

    ASPEK- second sketch is sweet. The A,P, and K on the first one arent that good. The A is the worst out of them imo, especially the bottom of the left bar and how it comes to a point at the top

    ACRSK- Thats cool dude. Im not feeling some of the golden arrows but thats just me. Do you do any normal simples or anything?

    JHIZ- lose the thing on your Z

    fuck the fame- the AE are dope! I could do without the arrows and that K seems a little too short and fat

    WGONE- the background looks a lot sloppier than usual

    Bilnek- The NVM is nice and simple. I really like the blue pen Esoe sketch that you can only see half of at the top. The first E on the brown one should be less tilted but I think you've heard that already

    Bait- super dope as always. You got my favorite style on this forum
     
  6. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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  7. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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    that bit coming out the top of the R really doesn't work, I would personally match the M and W more as essentially they are the same letter just upside down, the bars in the middle of the W and the E are thinner than the kick out leg of the R and the middle of the M, try and make it more consistent.

    pics for talking
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    Eido exchange
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    for valentines battle says Babes
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    Zens exchange and an Alts tried that west coast grimey style
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    Skep exchange
    and some real quick outlines, trying to get away from drawing pieces and practising quick outlines
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    afarm2.static.flickr.com_1393_5396108864_a997cfb6b9_z.jpg
    and some slaps
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  8. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    i like them all except for the babes one. i think thats probably one of the only bad things ive seen from you. caracters are nice. post the happy new year piece from your flickr its probably one of my favourites
     
  9. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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    yea to be honest I wasnt feeling the babes one but my wife liked it so as it was for her I left it lol

    here is the Happy New Year one
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  10. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    yea it was probably the hearts in the 3d that did it lol

    handstyles on that one are real nice
     
  11. MoganOne

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  12. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    When I did the hands on this one I was thinkin MSK
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  13. bait

    bait Senior Member

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    mone dat k is sexy on deck
     
  14. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Haha why thank you master baiter! :eek:
     
  15. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    We should hit up another exchange at some point my dude
     
  16. bait

    bait Senior Member

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    u all think too highly of me there so much more doper then me dudes on here
    n yeah we should
    n yo mone where u from?
     
  17. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Milwaukee Wisconsin... Watchin the pack attack right now
     
  18. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  19. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Some shit I did on Selm's table real quick with Decos
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  20. bait

    bait Senior Member

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    yo mone its quick n i fucking hate m n n
    how the fuck u make em flow?/:|
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