Bane, your trying WAY too hard to make your shit look cool. Tone it down, like WAY WAY WAY WAY down. hit the books and stay there for a long time. Figure out a handstyle, Figure out a throw that isnt a trashy Boner bite, and then maybe try a straight letter, but dont push it. Your pieces are all lackluster and lazy, Your letter structure blows (sorry but Blows is a compliment to the truth) and your pompous toy attitude is getting you in a lot of trouble in the city you live in, and im sure you're much too young to handle any of it, Just some crits for your punk ass. and im going easy on yah.
bottom page bump .. this shit is fire by far my fav piece from you the middle bar on the e is weird but I suck at pieces so I cant give tips/ ideas
you know the saying "you can never paint enough" sear... you're painting TOO much lol. biggest of props and the highest of fives broseph goebbels
Ha wordd homie, shit i just cant get enough im determined to make it somewhere in this shit man, thats how i look at it.
LOL what... ive yet to drop a outline in lak, its nice to have the nice paint but you cant get that shit all the time so you better get good with the american paints, then you can say you got can control
sear, your pieces are good and i have respect for someone that makes painting a daily thing but i want to see you put more movement into your letters bc no matter how "good" you make them and how correct your extensions become the piece will just look boring if it doesn't have movement but that's just my two cents on the matter sorey, thing on the top of your S is awkward, your O is wonky, i know you did that on purpose for some effect but it just looks weird IMO. the R is good in the backbone and the head but the leg is awkward and the point fucks up the flow, the top of the E is a little shaky and the Y should be scrapped. But overall its good and you have an interesting painting style props to the real heads
thnks for the tips. Ye i agree on the Y its fucked. I freestyle all my paintings and i wanted to try a diffrnt Y but it just didnt work out and after two outlines i said fuck it and threw a random y in it. W.e sall good styll
dope freight man... bad camera angle the bricks are actually straight... for the sketch battle.... overdid the drips on the g.... an this is the first time ive done cracks View attachment 609550
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sear: i really like that one its my favorite from you. stuck: good work dude, really solid just don't know about the Y.
sear- sexy as always.. love how your usin the rep and adding minor details to change up the style.. sorey- ill lovin the style and colors!
fuck yes! i was gonna do a gold fill and a red outline but you made that shit go with the blue outline/dropshadow. clean as fuck bro. keep on trucking! and sear, your can control is impeccable.